Nice Annachikn, I'd rework those creases on the jacket arms tho, they dont look like they are actually being caused by the weight or bunching, the back of the shoulder creases too.
Nice overall tho, keep it up :thumbup:
ha cool those fellas have got personality TomAnima
Ho ho killer NyneDown
I dig that style Jamesy
So sick Cosmo85!
I've been messing around with this skinny fella, just not happy about 'sumd00d' overall. I think the abs could still do with some work, perhaps abit more weight.
Screen grab from Maya.Used Xoliul shader for Maya.
Man, I'm really sorry, but this looks like he's wearing a glowing skeleton-costume for haloween. Why is he glowing in the first place? Isn't batman all about hidin in the shadows and striking on suprise?
I would get rid of them. I know, that makes him another batman, but those stripes do him no good I think.
Screen grab from Maya.Used Xoliul shader for Maya.
Alright, I honestly can't tell: Is the blue glow part of the design or is it some kind of construction mark to indicate something for the sake of modelling?
If it's part of the design, it needs to be reworked to LOOK like part of the design. Right now it looks like it's pasted over the top.
If it's part of some construction aspect, mind explaining it? I'm curious.
I made this model to try out the retopoly curves and polypaint in zbrush it's based on a concept made by Zoonoid http://cghub.com/images/view/322496/ .
@ silver_hoodlum :
Nice work! I like the modeling and the texturing of the body, but I think something is wrong with the front wheel. The wheel is too wide, or the space between the wheel and the sheet metal too tiny. What's happen if the suspension works ?
acapulco:
Please don't feel sorry about comments that's why I am here to get more constructive comment and critiques.
I think you are right about glow. Any other idea from your side?
Wearing a glowing skeleton-costume for Halloween ....:poly122:
Xelioth:
I just tried redesign the Batman model to give different look. Its was my idea to put those glow.
But I think I have to take care before redesign any model.Thanks for advice.
If it is a part of design, what kind changes you suggest for that glow, any idea? I would be grateful for that. Waiting for your reply.
Hi everybody, I'm new and still learning. This is one of my first models, its made from reference images, poligon modeled in Silo, 1600 faces without the eyes, I'll be posting it with textures soon.
haz: face is coming along nice! the lips and eyes are looking nice, i might broaden the tip of the nose just a little, wont really matter if you are planning on having your MF at game res with those kinds of camera distances because it will be so small, but it looks a bit too small in the front view atm, almost like a flat unwrap of a nose.
Thanks for the complement [HP], JamesMeader I'll be posting some wires in my progress thread in due time
Had a play with things this morning, thinking of wrapping this up soon, still need to do some breakdown shots and better images relating to the high poly sculpts.
Xelioth:
I just tried redesign the Batman model to give different look. Its was my idea to put those glow.
But I think I have to take care before redesign any model.Thanks for advice.
If it is a part of design, what kind changes you suggest for that glow, any idea? I would be grateful for that. Waiting for your reply.
At least to me, it looks like the blue glow doesn't follow the curves of the armor. It seems to be just kind of slapped on top of the other shapes?
The part that stands out to me is his chest plate. It looks like his plate follows the curve on his pecs, but the blue light just seems to be in a straight line. Same with his abs, those lines just seem to be straight rather than following the natural curves of his body.
I also think that, just in general, the blue lights create a lot of noise in the design. There are so many bright blue lines that the eye never has a place to rest.
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Nice overall tho, keep it up :thumbup:
ha cool those fellas have got personality TomAnima
Ho ho killer NyneDown
I dig that style Jamesy
So sick Cosmo85!
I've been messing around with this skinny fella, just not happy about 'sumd00d' overall. I think the abs could still do with some work, perhaps abit more weight.
@ Stirl: Really liked the C-17. Also from UDK. Great work. We would really like to see the cockpit too. I am rooting for you.
@ Irene: Great to see from Shingeki no Kyojin here. I am really looking forward to see a complete Annie. Good luck.
Man, I'm really sorry, but this looks like he's wearing a glowing skeleton-costume for haloween. Why is he glowing in the first place? Isn't batman all about hidin in the shadows and striking on suprise?
I would get rid of them. I know, that makes him another batman, but those stripes do him no good I think.
If it's part of the design, it needs to be reworked to LOOK like part of the design. Right now it looks like it's pasted over the top.
If it's part of some construction aspect, mind explaining it? I'm curious.
I made this model to try out the retopoly curves and polypaint in zbrush it's based on a concept made by Zoonoid http://cghub.com/images/view/322496/ .
Cheers!
S
Dude, loved this! Amazing!
Be cool to see some of the low poly wires.
Nice work! I like the modeling and the texturing of the body, but I think something is wrong with the front wheel. The wheel is too wide, or the space between the wheel and the sheet metal too tiny. What's happen if the suspension works ?
BhushanArekar - Love that jaw you have on Batman, makes him look like a right badass.
Little test bake of Cable. Currently baking the normals out for the arm. So watch this space and also keep this thread going!
More pixel stuff
This is sick. Im a big fan of space cowboys and middle aged vigilantes with bionic eye patches. (Cable included)
I would love to see this continued into a full robot or something.
Rendered in Modo in a single pass. Very minor post work (levels and a touch of noise) done in Photoshop.
Please don't feel sorry about comments that's why I am here to get more constructive comment and critiques.
I think you are right about glow. Any other idea from your side?
Wearing a glowing skeleton-costume for Halloween ....:poly122:
Xelioth:
I just tried redesign the Batman model to give different look. Its was my idea to put those glow.
But I think I have to take care before redesign any model.Thanks for advice.
If it is a part of design, what kind changes you suggest for that glow, any idea? I would be grateful for that. Waiting for your reply.
Di$array:
Thanks man you like this
StormTheGates:Nice work.
Also...legs...and shoes!
Took the same art test too
One thing to notice is that I baked the lens on flat plane.
Those lenses came out great. I didn't show mine off as much as I probably should, wanted to show off what was behind the lens more.
Nautilus landscape for Substrata... this may be the last one!
Some hand painterly business on Miss Fortunes face!!
-Woog
looks good! Any particular cellular process here, or just playing? Is it going to end up in a realtime pipeline?
@Ged I wanted to experiment soemthing a bit different from studio lighting, to give it a bit adventurous day lighting but ill check it
Great texture work!
Damnit, Haz. How is it your stuff both shames me and makes me want to get better?
Thanks for the complement [HP], JamesMeader I'll be posting some wires in my progress thread in due time
Had a play with things this morning, thinking of wrapping this up soon, still need to do some breakdown shots and better images relating to the high poly sculpts.
What do people think?
I agree with Praetus, I wish I had been around for your character workshop
Keep up the good work!
The part that stands out to me is his chest plate. It looks like his plate follows the curve on his pecs, but the blue light just seems to be in a straight line. Same with his abs, those lines just seem to be straight rather than following the natural curves of his body.
I also think that, just in general, the blue lights create a lot of noise in the design. There are so many bright blue lines that the eye never has a place to rest.
Did a little more work on this over the weekend, slowly getting there. Need to wrap this up and then get the luggage textured.
Wall of Death. My final piece for Substrata.