Azkur: She does have anti gravity tits. I don't really think size is a big deal, it's the lack of a sense of weight to them that bothers me and make them feel weird...
Having them press up against the shirt, or a sense of the bra really holding them in place is important.
Azkur: She does have anti gravity tits. I don't really think size is a big deal, it's the lack of a sense of weight to them that bothers me and make them feel weird...
Having them press up against the shirt, or a sense of the bra really holding them in place is important.
thanks for the feedback i really apreciate it and will take it into account while i am working on her. i already slightly reduced the size with input from my sister lool i didn't realize how big they were.
TheQiwiMan: thanks for understanding i hope you do in fact it would be awesome to start seeing some more feedback in general.
I think you could use a bit more resolution on the chairs. Primarily the headrests. It looks slightly lower res than the rest of the model for being the focus point.
I removed the headrests because they kinda looked silly from the start imho, about the res you are right.. though I am planning on doing a normal bake on pretty much all small bits and bobs for more detail. Here's a test bake of the seat!
Azkur, with all due respect, I think you completely overreacted. This is the WAYWO thread, it's not necessarily the place for in-depth critiques. By posting that image, TheQiwiMan was in fact giving you feedback: the breasts are comically large. We all knew that. He was just saying the obvious in a comical way. There's no need to take it personally.
Yeah, I agree with HitmonInfinity on the subject of the boobs. The funny image said just as much as if he had typed out a short critique. Plus, this is polycount... the reason I stay is because people aren't afraid to be a little funny or offensive, and won't hold your hand when critiquing your work. So I'm just not a fan of encouraging people to censor their reactions, immature though they may be at times.
But I really do love the character! Great work so far.
EVERYONE CHILL OUT ABOUT THE BOOBS. Just chill. Boobs.
I hereby give official permission (and mild encouragement) to everyone to add giant boobs to anything I ever post, even if I don't post an image. (now see how often that happens and be thankful someone bothered to do it for you)
also, render doodle poops of a warm up sketch this morning
HitmonInfinity : see i disagree partially with you, although i agree it was effective in delivering the message its not effective in explaining whats wrong necessarily and its specially not effective in making me think about it in the correct manner, i would be much more open to feedback when its well expressed than i am from a sarcastic image about something i spent hours working on. for example Moof gave a much better explanation of what he thought was wrong without even giving me a chance to take offense, its professional and creates a better environment in my opinion. you are free to disagree i don't think i own reason or anything i just feel that type of post isn't very productive. and yes i might have overacted, it happens some times i am sorry if it was unprofessional on my part. thanks for your input
Shiniku: being funny or offensive do nothing to forward artistic feedback in my opinion , you can be funny, sure, but i much rather receive brutally honest feedback which furthers arguments instead of creating personal disagreements. like i said before in this post i am sorry if my "overreaction" was unprofessional and thanks
awesome stuff Azkur and I like your style- I could be bias on this. I don't really see anything wrong with it besides on what Moof's critique.
I think style is very subjective depending on the artist and saying that, I'll compare your work with Joe Mad's Battle Chasers- Red Monica and I like Joe Mad's work. It's a bit hard to critique on someone's art style. just keep going Azkur.
@Serriffe thanks i think the issue here was more anatomical than anything else, you can have a style but you still need to follow anatomy but i appreciate it
@Tits just forget it i might have overacted a bit, just a lot of hours put into it and really thought people would comment on something else other than the boobs to be honest that's why i decided to downgrade their size now.
@Tits just forget it i might have overacted a bit, just a lot of hours put into it and really thought people would comment on something else other than the boobs to be honest that's why i decided to downgrade their size now.
Haha don't worry just trying to have a laugh
you did a very good job and people here just like to have a laugh, nothing personnal at all, everyone here like dem big boobs. As it was said before it was not to make fun of your work at all
Heyy guys am new to this forum but thought I should start posting some of my work up on here to get feedback etc Anyway here is a Pillar I am working on for a scene I am doing. Done the normal map by baking the texture from the high poly to a low poly and I used dDo to create some of the scratches on the pillar in the diffuse. Still needs some work but happy with the results to far Texture size is 1024x1024
Rendered out in Marmoset Toolbag
EVERYONE CHILL OUT ABOUT THE BOOBS. Just chill. Boobs.
I hereby give official permission (and mild encouragement) to everyone to add giant boobs to anything I ever post, even if I don't post an image. (now see how often that happens and be thankful someone bothered to do it for you)
also, render doodle poops of a warm up sketch this morning
You're welcome...but I need some help from Daphz on this one
Got a little more time to work on this dude some more. I'm going to re-visit those pant wrinkles/folds once I have more stuff blocked in..they look like crap right now
@Serriffe thanks i think the issue here was more anatomical than anything else, you can have a style but you still need to follow anatomy but i appreciate it
@Tits just forget it i might have overacted a bit, just a lot of hours put into it and really thought people would comment on something else other than the boobs to be honest that's why i decided to downgrade their size now.
I hereby give official permission (and mild encouragement) to everyone to add giant boobs to anything I ever post, even if I don't post an image. (now see how often that happens and be thankful someone bothered to do it for you)
Wow talk about immature !
This is an art forum where professionals meet and exchange knowledge.
We'll have none of this sort of behaviour here, this is your last warnings everyone.
Ferg great work mate, but I think you should extend the lips more, like this :
Feathers are getting some color. I'm not really feeling it just yet. but the alpha cards are in, few more small things and i should be ready to pose.
good night
Hey gang. After some adjustment the minigame Blue Devil: Fighter should be working now. When you give it a try, let me know if you see a progress bar on the loading screen (the one with the xbox controller). Since the game files are already on my pc, I can’t see if this function works.
Thanks, and let me know of any other bugs you run into!
From me, a completed piece. 13.5K tris, with separate UVS for clothing so I can do some clothing changes. Clothing is split up, but all-together the maps equal less than a 4096 map.
Oh my, you two have me in tears. However, I wouldn't be surprised if a mod sees this and gets a bit angry. However, it's good to see some humor every now and then.
That is a beautiful looking scene. My only suggestion is (if you wanted to replicate Nova Prospekt further) that you add more props around the area, perhaps a break in the ground from where some antlions have emerged?
Probably a bit of dirt or some decals here and there to break up this cleanliness.
Or a thumper somewhere, made this one a while back.
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Having them press up against the shirt, or a sense of the bra really holding them in place is important.
thanks for the feedback i really apreciate it and will take it into account while i am working on her. i already slightly reduced the size with input from my sister lool i didn't realize how big they were.
TheQiwiMan: thanks for understanding
I removed the headrests because they kinda looked silly from the start imho, about the res you are right.. though I am planning on doing a normal bake on pretty much all small bits and bobs for more detail. Here's a test bake of the seat!
Original thread: http://www.polycount.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124146
Next BBQ is on me!
FP-view-ish (Arms are OverDose arms)
But I really do love the character! Great work so far.
I hereby give official permission (and mild encouragement) to everyone to add giant boobs to anything I ever post, even if I don't post an image. (now see how often that happens and be thankful someone bothered to do it for you)
also, render doodle poops of a warm up sketch this morning
Very nice!
Looking forward to see some sweet bakes!
Shiniku: being funny or offensive do nothing to forward artistic feedback in my opinion , you can be funny, sure, but i much rather receive brutally honest feedback which furthers arguments instead of creating personal disagreements. like i said before in this post i am sorry if my "overreaction" was unprofessional and thanks
@Fizzly thanks mate
@HiernauxNicolas thanks for ur feedback, i didnt noticed the wheel thingy before, glad u meintioned it
About the tits image, i think is just a little parody, nothing offensive, maybe u can make the boobs slightly small but looking good
I think style is very subjective depending on the artist and saying that, I'll compare your work with Joe Mad's Battle Chasers- Red Monica and I like Joe Mad's work. It's a bit hard to critique on someone's art style. just keep going Azkur.
My name is tits after all
@Tits just forget it i might have overacted a bit, just a lot of hours put into it and really thought people would comment on something else other than the boobs to be honest that's why i decided to downgrade their size now.
Haha don't worry just trying to have a laugh
you did a very good job and people here just like to have a laugh, nothing personnal at all, everyone here like dem big boobs. As it was said before it was not to make fun of your work at all
Heyy guys am new to this forum but thought I should start posting some of my work up on here to get feedback etc
Rendered out in Marmoset Toolbag
You're welcome...but I need some help from Daphz on this one
Got a little more time to work on this dude some more. I'm going to re-visit those pant wrinkles/folds once I have more stuff blocked in..they look like crap right now
hey no problem
\o/
cut the tits folks
God Tier.
This is an art forum where professionals meet and exchange knowledge.
We'll have none of this sort of behaviour here, this is your last warnings everyone.
Ferg great work mate, but I think you should extend the lips more, like this :
good night
Highpoly Sculpt
AO and Normal
Hey gang. After some adjustment the minigame Blue Devil: Fighter should be working now. When you give it a try, let me know if you see a progress bar on the loading screen (the one with the xbox controller). Since the game files are already on my pc, I can’t see if this function works.
Thanks, and let me know of any other bugs you run into!
Blue Devil: Fighter v0.6
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awesome work here as usual !!
That is outstanding man. Love every aspect of it.
From me, a completed piece. 13.5K tris, with separate UVS for clothing so I can do some clothing changes. Clothing is split up, but all-together the maps equal less than a 4096 map.
Oh my, you two have me in tears. However, I wouldn't be surprised if a mod sees this and gets a bit angry. However, it's good to see some humor every now and then.
MysigKille
That is a beautiful looking scene. My only suggestion is (if you wanted to replicate Nova Prospekt further) that you add more props around the area, perhaps a break in the ground from where some antlions have emerged?
Probably a bit of dirt or some decals here and there to break up this cleanliness.
Or a thumper somewhere, made this one a while back.
REALTIME in Unity3D, rigged and animated.
Concept Chris Drysdale (spex84)
http://spex84.cghub.com/
http://www.chrisdrysdale.com/
Copcept KaZZantip(kazzantip.cghub.com)
Concept Tipa_graphic(tipa-graphic.cghub.com)
horrifically shameless crosspost from my Olga thread:
got to detail the skin next but I'm giving myself a little distance before I do to catch any form errors that I have going on.
I'm drooling
Working on another room for my scene. Probably should create a thread for this soon:
Using some modified versions of lens flares from Jordan Walkers bathhouse scene.