You got a lot of anatomy issues you need to address and proportions as well. The back muscles are incorrectly done and the quads and knees look very off. I don't think you have a thread for this, so I had to constructively critque is here. Good luck!
A lot of epic work in here!
I am taking a small break from my work on the Darksiders char and I tried to make something I am really bad at... a female face. 2-3 hours work on this gonna make a game res of it if I feel like it
katzeimsack - Love that airborn stuff!
TehSplatt - omg, you guys made me laugh. a lot!
Update on the battle-bot. Gave it some team-colors and some texture. Not sure how I want to do the shading, but preferably kinda cheap and with as few maps as possible.
Hey black objects against a black backdrop is not a good idea, try something more neutral like a mid value desaturated gray with a hint of blue to make your red pop out more.
katzeimsack - somehow you've made that baller environment even better
Meshiah - that dude is sick!
Marshal Banana - I really dig that, man! love the style
So I finally dusted off my Dizzy model from Haz's character course now that I'm the only lazy bum that hasn't finished, and I'm gonna call it done. More info in the thread if you're interested
I am a member of a game design team called Team Split Gear and we have made a game demo for our game "Discarded" we would all be really happy if everyone tried out demo and gave us comments on our wordpress.
katzeimsack - somehow you've made that baller environment even better
Meshiah - that dude is sick!
Marshal Banana - I really dig that, man! love the style
So I finally dusted off my Dizzy model from Haz's character course now that I'm the only lazy bum that hasn't finished, and I'm gonna call it done. More info in the thread if you're interested
LOL after seeing this and the sammus from the haz course... I feel like you guys must have ate Haz's brain and stole his powers of awesome. Kick ass man, keep up the brain eating... err I mean art.
Just practicing anatomy and trying to inspire others through my work hope you like
I find this running joke both hilarious and also poor taste... I gotta admit I laughed out loud reading it but who are we really making fun of here? People who are trying to get better and aren't as good as you guys yet? Everybody has to start somewhere... Lot of elitism here.
......or maybe I just suck and my you hurt my feelings.
katzeimsack - somehow you've made that baller environment even better
Meshiah - that dude is sick!
Marshal Banana - I really dig that, man! love the style
So I finally dusted off my Dizzy model from Haz's character course now that I'm the only lazy bum that hasn't finished, and I'm gonna call it done. More info in the thread if you're interested
Hey that guy your doing the farmer is lookin nice yo .I think it would be great if it were like a worm type guy .That would be hilarious .On the other one the Inspire peice .Pro man just pro LOL
katzeimsack - somehow you've made that baller environment even better
Meshiah - that dude is sick!
Marshal Banana - I really dig that, man! love the style
So I finally dusted off my Dizzy model from Haz's character course now that I'm the only lazy bum that hasn't finished, and I'm gonna call it done. More info in the thread if you're interested
I've been working in free time on modded heads for Dark Souls.
It's been a massive challenge to produce anything, since I'm working without their meshes so I built my own UVed base mesh. It has two different UV sets that needed to align perfectly with their UVs
Oh, and the game stomps over your diffuse texture using its own texture overlays, which you can't modify.
still working on my landscape. this is what is probably the finished World Machine part. next is importing into UDK once i get clearance from my client.
purehilarityI see where you are coming from and i understand completely but when i was making it i was talking to a friend at the same time just doing all the stuff i find funny about new modellers the way they look up "old paper" on google and over lay it across there whole shot and use red wax and have there name massive across the top with the zbrush poly count haha it was actually more of a lesson on what not to do but im sorry if i offended any one and tbh my first head sculpt was way worse than the one i posted haha
tadpole3159: amazing sculpt. Really, horses are hard to get right.
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Wow.. Beautiful work, absolutely love it
I did this maybe a month ago: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZOuYAhlhdtk It's got some issues and it's a little long and maybe doesn't evolve as much as I'd like it to, but if you have a sec could you check it out and give me some feedback? Cheers guys
@Jedairusz:
Spec and Diffuse look good,
but the bumb is weak, feels like two layers (ground+rock)
Try to load the diffuse into zbrush/mudbox and sculpt the basic shapes, then use crazybump to add the small details. Or paint a hightmap that is closer to what the reference woudl look like.
@chris89: nice work on that mood, how quick is quick? haha @karatekodden: saw that and thought, that looks like it could be in the matrix! checked out your thread and sure enough. @katzeimsack: airborn is looking rad @funky bunnies: i dont really know what to say, so, great job!
really cool art in here!
probably gonna call this high poly about done minus whatever crits i may get. its my first real attempt at finishing a high poly. kinda feel ive made my edges a bit too tight, but im hitting that point where i want to take what ive learned and apply it to a new piece.
Great work my friend, another model to add to the collection (checked out your website!)
BTW: I have problems seeing the whole of the second main image of the girl. The JavaScript you have for the slideshow isn't respecting the bottom scrollbar as it's centered to screen. Scrollbar gets smaller image does not advance ~ Google Chrome.
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More texture work on the normandy, only been focusing on the main body so far.
Great job, dude! They look great
You got a lot of anatomy issues you need to address and proportions as well. The back muscles are incorrectly done and the quads and knees look very off. I don't think you have a thread for this, so I had to constructively critque is here. Good luck!
I am taking a small break from my work on the Darksiders char and I tried to make something I am really bad at... a female face. 2-3 hours work on this gonna make a game res of it if I feel like it
TehSplatt - omg, you guys made me laugh. a lot!
Update on the battle-bot. Gave it some team-colors and some texture. Not sure how I want to do the shading, but preferably kinda cheap and with as few maps as possible.
Hey black objects against a black backdrop is not a good idea, try something more neutral like a mid value desaturated gray with a hint of blue to make your red pop out more.
mystichobo I like that chunky style for the tank
Meshiah - that dude is sick!
Marshal Banana - I really dig that, man! love the style
So I finally dusted off my Dizzy model from Haz's character course now that I'm the only lazy bum that hasn't finished, and I'm gonna call it done. More info in the thread if you're interested
I did a cheezy turnaround too cuz it was hard to see all the parts from a still haha.
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Wordpress: http://discardedthegame.wordpress.com/
LOL after seeing this and the sammus from the haz course... I feel like you guys must have ate Haz's brain and stole his powers of awesome. Kick ass man, keep up the brain eating... err I mean art.
EDIT: ops quoted wrong post.
I find this running joke both hilarious and also poor taste... I gotta admit I laughed out loud reading it but who are we really making fun of here? People who are trying to get better and aren't as good as you guys yet? Everybody has to start somewhere... Lot of elitism here.
......or maybe I just suck and my you hurt my feelings.
I think you could make the composition a lot better. Everything is straight on and has a ton of parallel lines.
I was scrolling through your thread with my mouth open th
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I think I'm calling this one done.
aww Man U beat me to the concept ref-- but this is looking nice-
speechless- awesome work man
Hey that guy your doing the farmer is lookin nice yo .I think it would be great if it were like a worm type guy .That would be hilarious .On the other one the Inspire peice .Pro man just pro LOL
MAGNIFICENT !
It's been a massive challenge to produce anything, since I'm working without their meshes so I built my own UVed base mesh. It has two different UV sets that needed to align perfectly with their UVs
Oh, and the game stomps over your diffuse texture using its own texture overlays, which you can't modify.
no. Not done.
@funky bunnies - that is so amazing!
Please Note: Will be removing the obvious wall painting tiling!
Still needs to be polished texture wise.
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Wow.. Beautiful work, absolutely love it
I did this maybe a month ago: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZOuYAhlhdtk It's got some issues and it's a little long and maybe doesn't evolve as much as I'd like it to, but if you have a sec could you check it out and give me some feedback? Cheers guys
There's also a mini tutorial on baking gradients for those interested in my thread.
This thread makes me want to do something crazy!! ( in a good way
Spec and Diffuse look good,
but the bumb is weak, feels like two layers (ground+rock)
Try to load the diffuse into zbrush/mudbox and sculpt the basic shapes, then use crazybump to add the small details. Or paint a hightmap that is closer to what the reference woudl look like.
@karatekodden: saw that and thought, that looks like it could be in the matrix! checked out your thread and sure enough.
@katzeimsack: airborn is looking rad
@funky bunnies: i dont really know what to say, so, great job!
really cool art in here!
probably gonna call this high poly about done minus whatever crits i may get. its my first real attempt at finishing a high poly. kinda feel ive made my edges a bit too tight, but im hitting that point where i want to take what ive learned and apply it to a new piece.
Otherwise it looks pretty good
BTW: I have problems seeing the whole of the second main image of the girl. The JavaScript you have for the slideshow isn't respecting the bottom scrollbar as it's centered to screen. Scrollbar gets smaller image does not advance ~ Google Chrome.
Here's my addition to the thread: some work in progress on a Luton van for an upcoming advertisement.