Prolow: her boobies look a bit flat from the side, they might be a little low too - generally there's about a head's length of distance from the chin to the nipples (ok, female nipples are a bit lower), but I also think her head is a bit small, that could be all there was to it. The body is getting really nice otherwise.
And even correct her posture, she is leaning a bit forward.
Ged> Not bad. I do think though for a guy with such a huge upper body, that his legs should be a lot bigger. Either way though, I think the main problem is that his legs are kinda a little too far apart. It's like he's doing a standing squat, it's a little weird.
thanks for the crit! I knew something was odd but couldnt figure out what exactly, will see what I can do later.
Definitely a lot better now!! Overall the body is looking great.
Only crits are the boobs are a little flat, like krisCrash said. They look good from the front though, but I'd also soften the line from them to the armpit, it's a bit too pronounced now.
I also think the deltoid and upper back could use a bit more softening, they're still a bit man-ish. The neck could probably be a bit thinner and softer, but its alright, up to you.
Last thing is the face. Dunno how much work you've done on it, but it could definitely be a lot more feminine. She almost reads as an older man right now. Partly I think that's from the haircut that looks like a receeding hairline with a slight come-over :P I also think the eye brow and jawline need to be reshaped and softened into a more feminine look. I think the forehead may also be a bit too pronounced.
Mezz: thanks for the feedback! also good timing, i has updates
started with some hair practice, the tried out a style, will sketch some more ideas tomorrow
Hey long time no post, Lots of very cool work going on here.
Got some spare time atm, so I have been working on some viking art (love the banner valkyrie..! ). This is inspired by everything from Bathory to Vindictus. just working on armour atm, body face is temp for now.
Update: 3DVlad
Those cuts are actually the engine holder, but i made them really sloppy.
I think, I will revise this part as soon as possible, looks pretty ugly right now.
Quickly threw this guy together to test out sculpting in Mud, but found my laptop's too crappy to run it. Not sure if I still want to finish him, maybe I'll just end up doing a hand-painted low poly..
only about an hour in zbrush, still need to do a lot of tweaking. i haven't even touched the legs. i plan on giving him some sweet ass war-torn armor after i finish up the body sculpt
man im in awe at how well motivated some of you guys are...and damn jelous too!
phew just managed to tear away from the telly and get some more work done on this sucker..
wowwowow, thats really really sweet. can you explain how you made the pants so tight , and how you added those small wrinkles so realistilcly?
much apreiciated.
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And even correct her posture, she is leaning a bit forward.
Blargh....
Texturework during lunchbreak
thanks for the crit! I knew something was odd but couldnt figure out what exactly, will see what I can do later.
is that rikimaru from tenchu?
(Inspired by the cool plant sculpture of Jaime Margary)
To do: unrwap, bake some maps, import to engine.
Yeah, I was gonna ask the same thing. If so, whole body please
Making a modular robot base thing. I kinda get the feeling the body base has problems though.
Nice.
@onionhead_o
Yep.
Tried to make him look more asian.
Scar is a placeholder.
Doodling last nite..
Only crits are the boobs are a little flat, like krisCrash said. They look good from the front though, but I'd also soften the line from them to the armpit, it's a bit too pronounced now.
I also think the deltoid and upper back could use a bit more softening, they're still a bit man-ish. The neck could probably be a bit thinner and softer, but its alright, up to you.
Last thing is the face. Dunno how much work you've done on it, but it could definitely be a lot more feminine. She almost reads as an older man right now. Partly I think that's from the haircut that looks like a receeding hairline with a slight come-over :P I also think the eye brow and jawline need to be reshaped and softened into a more feminine look. I think the forehead may also be a bit too pronounced.
Other than those points, looking really great!
started with some hair practice, the tried out a style, will sketch some more ideas tomorrow
Got some spare time atm, so I have been working on some viking art (love the banner valkyrie..! ). This is inspired by everything from Bathory to Vindictus. just working on armour atm, body face is temp for now.
God my handle is soooooo 15 years ago.... ha
some progress and concepts here http://wolfland-andrewgilmour.blogspot.com/
3DVlad
Those cuts are actually the engine holder, but i made them really sloppy.
I think, I will revise this part as soon as possible, looks pretty ugly right now.
looks good though
Just a nit-pick.
Chimneys can't collapse like that. Even old-old school chimneys just aren't constructed in such a manner as to be able to produce that awkward stand.
some progress pics from my turtle with a test rig..
Stylized young Alligator I'm working on for my major. First time *really* tackling sculpting and I'm loving it
standing on a rooftop with wind in all that cloth..
Maybe its just an Old Pillar?
Awesome is it for Ivans Secret?
only about an hour in zbrush, still need to do a lot of tweaking. i haven't even touched the legs. i plan on giving him some sweet ass war-torn armor after i finish up the body sculpt
~ Really beautiful sketch man.
Currently I'm in "dat ass" mode right now
Tiny crit, but could you make the hoodie's zipper line go around the breasts on the side instead of on top of them?
Nice stuff you've got here!
I'll be visiting to get some inspiring kicks
Looking gooood. Supra Vaiders?
phew just managed to tear away from the telly and get some more work done on this sucker..
wowwowow, thats really really sweet. can you explain how you made the pants so tight , and how you added those small wrinkles so realistilcly?
much apreiciated.
@dustinbrown
that looks good just the ears need to be more stylized or some more love .