hey vitor, i think you have a slight issue with the palms and the wrist, the way it's bent makes it seem like the hand lacks much volume. I am concerned about the size of the hands as well. Maybe you can scale them up a bit.
I also think the breasts are pushed together a bit too unnaturally, i know you intend to have a tank top, but i think laying them to the side a little bit will appear more natural.
so based on termi/psycores request/concept a modular laser fence system for dystopia:
i also took the time and compiled all the models and copy pasted em into a dod source test scene (source sdk HAPPEND to be set to dod source ... no conspiracy here)
so here is warby style completely random total busyness extravaganza:
mvelasquez if you want a crit I'm going to say you should break up the spec by adding overlays to make it non uniform! (at the moment it feels a little plastic in the closeup shot, but he's great anyway!
Hey.. bit of a contrast from the rest of the stuff on the page.. This is the second model I've done (the first was the bench from Ben Mathis' tutorial ) and I think I may have stepped a bit too far, without even a proper model sheet or anything, but hey, it'd be nice to get some comments
hey killingpeople I think you just need to step a level down, unhide everything and subdivide. It will keep the next level and subdivide the rest. I may be wrong but I think I got a similar issue months ago
MAUL0r:
like i say, it's what my dad calls it, and i like the guy so... say, aren't those eggy basket guys they the same people who say zed-brush?... XP
notman:
i used an empty soup can to punch a hole in the bread. use whatever will give you a good 'basket'.
add butter to the bread after the punch, heat on a medium flame. drop an egg in there, and the most important step, add a sprinkle of lawry's
yum.
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I also think the breasts are pushed together a bit too unnaturally, i know you intend to have a tank top, but i think laying them to the side a little bit will appear more natural.
cool stuff fuse, don't hold back so much on your details and ideas, go mental!!
Great texture Johnny, doesn't look to intimidating to me though, more like a corporate accountant gone angry
Here goes one of mine
Started the model and then thought it would be time to learn to rig and animate.
No animations to show yet, but I rigged him. I like puppets. Maybe finish him, I know somebody that wants to texture him but ... ( :P )
891 faces without weapon. 1007 with.
*pop*
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I wonder who that person is...
Shall get cracking on it as soon as I remember to send the file to my home email addy...
Where is the busts lower lip?
508 tris without the ball
better shot in the daylight.
Went away for a long time.. learning and improving my pixelling skills
wip:
(learnt C too and a little SDL
hope to come back to 3D soon with some really low poly and pixel texture!
and by the way here is my face
so based on termi/psycores request/concept a modular laser fence system for dystopia:
i also took the time and compiled all the models and copy pasted em into a dod source test scene (source sdk HAPPEND to be set to dod source ... no conspiracy here)
so here is warby style completely random total busyness extravaganza:
crit if you want
mvelasquez if you want a crit I'm going to say you should break up the spec by adding overlays to make it non uniform! (at the moment it feels a little plastic in the closeup shot, but he's great anyway!
sorry if it's an eyesore hehe
a sculpture I did this weekend
614 tris
hmm.. it didn't divide the hidden faces..
like i say, it's what my dad calls it, and i like the guy so... say, aren't those eggy basket guys they the same people who say zed-brush?... XP
notman:
i used an empty soup can to punch a hole in the bread. use whatever will give you a good 'basket'.
add butter to the bread after the punch, heat on a medium flame. drop an egg in there, and the most important step, add a sprinkle of lawry's
yum.
wip venom-spawn
After all those years playing "hockey" and wearing the mask (and being killed gawd knows how many times), he should look a bit more rotten
my dad calls it "egg in a frame" i've heard other names, but it's my dad, so what can you do?
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Straight to the reference folder!
-caseyjones
my dad calls it "egg in a frame" i've heard other names, but it's my dad, so what can you do?
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I don't know what renderer you're using but it looks delicious. Wires?
Nice work.
The red on the transition to the metal looks too blurry to me. You could try to make it more bloody scarred.
@ diffa
The shape of the eyesockets looking strange. And of course he needs to look creepy!
@ poopinmymouth
Sexy polyflow!
http://www.freakinghugeurl.com
this is a WIP, but the shoulder has a star type of poly, is that going to deform well..?
work that ass!!