Sketchbook: Esbjörn

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

Hi, and welcome to my sketchbook.

This sketchbook displays my struggles to get good. Go to the last page if you want to see my latest work.

Feedback is very welcome!

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/j2/h8ua2vjizuqr.jpg

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

Edit: why doesn't my pictures work?

Edit 2: hang on, i got this

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

Some of todays work:

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

better with or without lamps?

AimBiZ · Nov 2012

Well I'm a sucker for glowing things everywhere but you might wanna think closer about why to put them there. Use it as a tool for focal points of the design. I guess the shoulders could do without and the light on the hands a bit thicker or even some other shapes. Could be some kind of indicator to show that the hands are loaded with some energy.

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

AimBiZ wrote: »

Well I'm a sucker for glowing things everywhere but you might wanna think closer about why to put them there. Use it as a tool for focal points of the design. I guess the shoulders could do without and the light on the hands a bit thicker or even some other shapes. Could be some kind of indicator to show that the hands are loaded with some energy.

Good point! thanks for feedback!

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

Some thumbnail-sketches:

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

Drawing a mug from real life:

Any critique is appreciated!

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

Doing some value study ( I got to do more of these

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aaron2 · Nov 2012

Hey great work

loved it

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

Doing some real life studies again:

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

just a warmup:

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

Todays value-study:

I might polish some of them up later, or i'll just continue practicing.

AimBiZ · Nov 2012

Nice to see thumbnails. I think you could push your value contrast just a tiny bit, particularly with the shadows. Some of the bigger shaded areas feels a bit like emptiness rather than something being covered by shadow.

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

AimBiZ wrote: »

Nice to see thumbnails. I think you could push your value contrast just a tiny bit, particularly with the shadows. Some of the bigger shaded areas feels a bit like emptiness rather than something being covered by shadow.

Thank you so much for the criticism! Im practising value every day now, but to be honest i mostly stuggeling to get the base values right, but i'll guess i will get confortable with that after a while. And i will ofc try to push my values more, i'll probably post an update today or on monday with the resault.
Thanks again!

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

Did some traditionall stuff today so i didnt have time to do any digital value study

well, heres the digital piece:

Edit: only had time to do one*

AimBiZ · Nov 2012

I see you pushed your values a bit. Reads pretty good and solid foundation for a scene. Crit on the foreground, the scrap heap is too noisy I think. You could use it as an element to tell a story with the scene, like having some particular objects protruding from the heap. Also the greens reads as plant rather than junk, or is it supposed to be plabts, like vines and stuff growing over the junk?

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Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

AimBiZ wrote: »

I see you pushed your values a bit. Reads pretty good and solid foundation for a scene. Crit on the foreground, the scrap heap is too noisy I think. You could use it as an element to tell a story with the scene, like having some particular objects protruding from the heap. Also the greens reads as plant rather than junk, or is it supposed to be plabts, like vines and stuff growing over the junk?

Once again, thanks for critice! The green is actually supposed to be plants, but perhaps i should improve it abit so there is no doubt. I might also continue to define the foreground, i didnt want to spend to much time on this piece but i'll think i go in again and fix my mistakes.

Thanks again!

Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

Going to post some warmups, have been doing 3d and traitionall latly, so not much to show.

This one is not a warmup, just trying out some character design things:

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Esbjörn Nord · Nov 2012

real-life study again, i messed up some stuff on this one though, there was some unexpected background elements that i noticed halfway thorugh, so some of the lightning looks irregular.

Edit: minor perpective mistake

Edit 2: more mistakes:

Esbjörn Nord · Dec 2012

Todays valuestudy:

Esbjörn Nord · Dec 2012

Facestudy:

I really learned alot from thisone, felt that i improved during the study (it might have to do with that i didnt do any warmup aswell).

nr 1 is from reference, rest is from mind.

AimBiZ · Dec 2012

For face studies, you should focus on drawing from life. Gather some photos of people (friends are fun to do) and do portraits. You'll expand your visual library this way.
If you wanna get more in-depth of structure drawing some skulls is a good idea.

Esbjörn Nord · Dec 2012

AimBiZ wrote: »

For face studies, you should focus on drawing from life. Gather some photos of people (friends are fun to do) and do portraits. You'll expand your visual library this way.
If you wanna get more in-depth of structure drawing some skulls is a good idea.

Allright! But the problem with faces in my opinion is that the values get all messed up when taking a picture of a face?
But i will definitely try!
I really appriciate your help and tips, thanks!

AimBiZ · Dec 2012

Esbjörn Nord wrote: »

Allright! But the problem with faces in my opinion is that the values get all messed up when taking a picture of a face?
But i will definitely try!
I really appriciate your help and tips, thanks!

Well, depends on the photo really. A thing to keep in mind is that photos are usually more contrasted than what the eye would perceive. So pick material that you think suits your needs best.

Esbjörn Nord · Dec 2012

Followed AimBiz advice and did a facestudy from references:

Esbjörn Nord · Dec 2012

Edit: nope

Esbjörn Nord · Dec 2012

Some fairly quick environment sketches:

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

back after a (too long) vacation. well, here's some work:

And a WIP, will finish tomorrow:

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

Well, as promised, finished yesterdays work:

i didnt like how her weapon on her right arm turned out, so i might re-work the design and render.

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

just a quick drawing of a car:

the perspective got a little skewed unfortunately

I also got to do more material studies.

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

Valuestudy:

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

I just had to render up todays worm up:

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

Valuestudy with sci-fi planet theme:

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

Some raceing vehicle:

will perhaps redesign this thing (I came up with another idea towards the end).

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

quick cartony character design:

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

Did two quick design sketches before bedtime. Over and out.

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

noticed that it was ages since i updated (have been doing traditionall this week), but here's a quick enviroment:

Caspar · Jan 2013

Nice Lightning and colours! You should do more environment paintings because I like them, maybe work some more on one or two and post. And as other people have suggested, insert some subjects into the world. Vehicles and/or people and animals, and try to implement them so they feel connected

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

Caspar wrote: »

Nice Lightning and colours! You should do more environment paintings because I like them, maybe work some more on one or two and post. And as other people have suggested, insert some subjects into the world. Vehicles and/or people and animals, and try to implement them so they feel connected

good points, ironically i sketched in a human, resting on the balcony in my last post, but i accidently painted him over when i started the render

But I will make sure to follow your advise at my future work!

thanks for feedback, alaways appreciated!

Esbjörn Nord · Jan 2013

Update: quick enviroment (tryed to follow caspars advise and add some animals and stuff) tuned out okay.

Esbjörn Nord · Feb 2013

allright, time for update:

Any suggestions to improve design, pressentation, render or whatever you think of is highly appreciated!

AimBiZ · Feb 2013

Sweet design there!

You wanted suggestions so here's mine.

Presentation-wise the rendering of the bot feels a bit cramped in its corner. Bring it more towards the center and make sure it's the natural focal point for the viewer. It kinda competes for attention with the blueprint atm.

How does the robot move? It gives me the impression of being built to hop around like a rabbit, which wouldn't work well for aiming those canons.
I'm not too fond of the hind legs but I like the front ones. Perhaps put the rear as well and have the legs in more spider-like configuration? The biggest concern I can see is the legs attaching to the body. Looks like there's not much room for turning or doing strafing maneuvers.

Those are my cents. I must add that I like that you put the robot on a ground slice. It's working very effectively describing the environment without having to render a full one, which could easily get too complex for an effective presentation.

Symmetry · Feb 2013

good job i like robots, nicely detailed

Esbjörn Nord · Feb 2013

@AimBiz:

Thanks! I will deffenatly change the pressentation, you are abosutley right about that!
I agree about the legs aswell, but that might take a littlebit more time to change... I hope i will have time to change them, since that piece might be in my portfolio.
Thanks for feedback!

@Symmetry:

Thanks, i appriciate it!

Here's a story telling piece i did for M2M games ( http://www.polycount.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116326 )

Esbjörn Nord · Feb 2013

And a WIP:

Esbjörn Nord · Feb 2013

Traditionall drawing of walter white:

( + bonus mobilephone-camera quality!

)

Esbjörn Nord · Feb 2013

Some prop design:

Esbjörn Nord · Feb 2013

quick doodle:

Sketchbook: Esbjörn

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