Hello people, i worked over this sentry this week, i finished the mapping part of the level 1 - RED (yeah, i love RED) later i will finish the BLU version.
The texture on the body is a bit noisy on the right side, compared to the left which looks great. Could possibly do without the logo or the G-12. The overall shape is great, and should I say more adorable than the regular baby sentry.
The texture on the body is a bit noisy on the right side, compared to the left which looks great. Could possibly do without the logo or the G-12. The overall shape is great, and should I say more adorable than the regular baby sentry.
people are more bound to attack the side with the interface on it no?
its cool, but i dont think the engineer would let it fall into such disrepair. i mean, rusty is okay, but the vent in the back makes it look likes hes ignored it.
can we see them a bit fixed up?
its cool, but i dont think the engineer would let it fall into such disrepair. i mean, rusty is okay, but the vent in the back makes it look likes hes ignored it.
can we see them a bit fixed up?
humm...ok, i took note. I will see if more people think the vent is too much broken. I have no problem with the vent, but if the majority here thinks fix the vent is a good idea, i do
i'm loving it.
When i first saw the first version of the lv 3 i was blown away though. i didnt like it so much, but i love your new level three. i think it would be cool it if were fully defensive, and shot grenades instead of rockets. those barrels just make me think grenades more.
Well..keep in mind that vent will be discarted in the upgrade to level 2. Think in that line of upgrade like the eng taking a half baked machine and upgrading it to the level max in better conditions etc.
wow, cant believe i havent seen this one. nice turret, love the concept! My only crit would be that you still have too much dirt overlayed and not enough large brush strokes.
great directions that thread give to me. I worked a bit more in the texture, put more brush strokes and less dirt. I cant wait to start the building animation >........<
How about making the Logo a weathered white paint. Would pop out more...
i agree with this and btw the colours really are great with the texture also what are your other ideas or dont you have any yet ? love the sentry its so cute
i agree with this and btw the colours really are great with the texture also what are your other ideas or dont you have any yet ? love the sentry its so cute
ahhaa i have a lot of ideas for my "machinery garden" but dont have time to work on it. I will have luck if i can conclude this sentry
What's with the curly logo? Looks really out of place. Anyway, the texture is getting there, but it's still too dirty. Take a look at the existing sentry texture.
I love this sentry design. I was really hoping someone was going to be bold/foolhardy enough to attempt a Sentry Gun remodel, and this utterly fails to disappoint me!
I don't envy you or Valve though, cuz I can only imagine that the construction and upgrades are going to be an enormous b!tch to animate.
Regarding the model, I agree with the Chickenman who said that the control panel thing look too detailed, it should be more simplistic, less buttons and stuff. Also the wires look a bit too thin, I think they'd fit the TF2 theme better if they were a bit thicker and therefor more distinct.
OK! LucyCharm with less dirt. I think i wont remove more dirty. The shine effect is from the game engine. Im happy with this little sentry, i will start to work in the level 2 soon.
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people are more bound to attack the side with the interface on it no?
can we see them a bit fixed up?
humm...ok, i took note. I will see if more people think the vent is too much broken. I have no problem with the vent, but if the majority here thinks fix the vent is a good idea, i do
When i first saw the first version of the lv 3 i was blown away though. i didnt like it so much, but i love your new level three. i think it would be cool it if were fully defensive, and shot grenades instead of rockets. those barrels just make me think grenades more.
But it looks amazing none-the-less.
Than again, might not hurt to fix it up a bit.
Dear god, I'm such an indecisive bastard.
Fix up the vent and post a side by side comparison of the beat up vent. Than we'll all be able to better judge.
Have you followed Swizzle's guide?
http://www.polycount.com/forum/showthread.php?t=73559
oh..nice find. I will try to make the red/blue areas with more "brush"effect. I never do that, let's see.
ahhaa i have a lot of ideas for my "machinery garden" but dont have time to work on it. I will have luck if i can conclude this sentry
I don't envy you or Valve though, cuz I can only imagine that the construction and upgrades are going to be an enormous b!tch to animate.
This is the whole package. Each sentry level counts as a separate item towards the rules of the Polycount Pack Contest.
I like the vent as is.
The G-12 font looks a bit out of place to me.
Should be easy to do, relatively speaking. This is considering the existing Sentry Gun has rotating miniguns. Probably a very simple animation.
things in TF2 tend to have only 1 switch or 1 button.
That's obviously just my opinion.
Also, don't you have to make spots for sappers to be placed? I vote for behind the shield and on the top.
I disagree!
That is not just your opinion, it is mine too.
TBH, I don't think you should use the RED logo, maybe just stencil it on the chasis somewhere.
Oh Shit oh fuck oh shit oh fuck oh fuck!
AHHAUAHUAHAHUAHUHAUHAUHUA That was the first prototype XD The level 3 was changed and became less....agressive