digging the headphones hazardous....perhaps a visor wraping around the face from earphone to earphone in the same stlye as the force field malarky on the armbands? Seethrough rather than obscuring the face if that makes sense? Anyways looking rather good mister
lookin good man, I agree with Seth though you need to get a litttle more epic on the headphones.
Something like this, or if you really wanna man up, something like THIS.
Why do i keep clicking the Chun Li posts? This contest makes me feel 13 all over again, .
Love the revision! I think the mechanical bits coming out of her head could be more bulbous to hearken back to her original form a little more. Separate hovering geometry might work a little better than the 2d rings as well. Maybe little glowy balls or cubes that hover around her wrist? Or maybe just go full on with the original concept and throw some spikes on there.
I hate to be "that guy" asking for more boob, but i think this model could benefit from it. Maybe you can take some inspiration from this:
Maph: Thanks man! I might still do something with the ribbons, I'll see how it looks once I get to the texture stage
Bbox85: I think I will be kicking the thong for good, but I'll be replacing it with some sleek pelvic shapes on the bodysuit
Makkon: No nostrils at this early stage dude haha, ill save that for later!
Seth: Thanks man, good ideas I may play with this if I reach the textre stage and feel like she still needs something to top her off!
Scudz: Damn son, Good point on the headphones, i may just do some scaling with those as im in the high poly.
Crazyfingers: Added a section of skin above her breastline just for you! :P Good idea about the glowing geo too man, ill play with this more at the final stages!
Ballo: Thanks man, I'll play with making this a bit longer in zbrush!
Moving into high now, cant loose any more time!!
I've further reduced some of the noisey elements - blocked in some rough glove parts and boots.
Decided the body-suit will contain some extra layers and details that should finish and balance her out nicely, without loosing the integrity of the original design too much.
You know what's best man!! A skin tight full body suit is sexy. A thong probably wouldn't be the best... It'd be like wearing underwear over your pants.
just, just what are you trying to do to us here?!? I don't even know what to say beyond the ramblings of a man whose loins have just melted through the earths core and come up in china looking for a fight.
Woah thanks guys!! I will be tweaking to make her more asian - Thanks Vadim!!
Onelunglewis: Thanks man i will add some more
LRoy: A Semi Paintover I guess you could call it, most of it is polypainted on my ztl, there are small highlights like the lip, and eye that I painted in photoshop.
Going to second Stinger, though, that was why I initially wanted to respond. Her chin right now is real tiny (and sharp). It's just, you can see the size of a couple front teeth - I can't imagine 28-30 proportionately sized other teeth fitting into her jaw with it being as small as it is right now.
I'd say either round out/slightly (slightly) enlarge the chin - or raise her mouth up a little bit to compensate and make her jaw look like it's got a bit more to it.
Big move scrapping what you had going initially but it's turned out for the better. Look forward to more updates. :thumbup:
WOW. I think it is pretty perfect man. I am a sucker for a pretty face. If I had anything to mention it would be that the tear duct region looks a little too long. But whatever, shut up me. Really nice job man. I think I am in love
Frapp-alicious looking awesome, Maybe her bottom lip could be pulled out ever so slightly, looks like shes breathing in. Really looking forward to this, great job
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Something like this, or if you really wanna man up, something like THIS.
Love the revision! I think the mechanical bits coming out of her head could be more bulbous to hearken back to her original form a little more. Separate hovering geometry might work a little better than the 2d rings as well. Maybe little glowy balls or cubes that hover around her wrist? Or maybe just go full on with the original concept and throw some spikes on there.
I hate to be "that guy" asking for more boob, but i think this model could benefit from it. Maybe you can take some inspiration from this:
You are a great inspiration Hazardous! She looks more agile now, good job this one rocks!
Maph: Thanks man! I might still do something with the ribbons, I'll see how it looks once I get to the texture stage
Bbox85: I think I will be kicking the thong for good, but I'll be replacing it with some sleek pelvic shapes on the bodysuit
Makkon: No nostrils at this early stage dude haha, ill save that for later!
Seth: Thanks man, good ideas I may play with this if I reach the textre stage and feel like she still needs something to top her off!
Scudz: Damn son, Good point on the headphones, i may just do some scaling with those as im in the high poly.
Crazyfingers: Added a section of skin above her breastline just for you! :P Good idea about the glowing geo too man, ill play with this more at the final stages!
Ballo: Thanks man, I'll play with making this a bit longer in zbrush!
Moving into high now, cant loose any more time!!
I've further reduced some of the noisey elements - blocked in some rough glove parts and boots.
Decided the body-suit will contain some extra layers and details that should finish and balance her out nicely, without loosing the integrity of the original design too much.
Zbrush Time.
Very solid clean work as usual mate.
face update!
just, just what are you trying to do to us here?!? I don't even know what to say beyond the ramblings of a man whose loins have just melted through the earths core and come up in china looking for a fight.
damn.
Onelunglewis: Thanks man i will add some more
LRoy: A Semi Paintover I guess you could call it, most of it is polypainted on my ztl, there are small highlights like the lip, and eye that I painted in photoshop.
Looks identical to this one:
Going to second Stinger, though, that was why I initially wanted to respond. Her chin right now is real tiny (and sharp). It's just, you can see the size of a couple front teeth - I can't imagine 28-30 proportionately sized other teeth fitting into her jaw with it being as small as it is right now.
I'd say either round out/slightly (slightly) enlarge the chin - or raise her mouth up a little bit to compensate and make her jaw look like it's got a bit more to it.
Big move scrapping what you had going initially but it's turned out for the better. Look forward to more updates. :thumbup:
Jacque: Thats my main inspiration for the face!
Am going to leave it here and move onto to the rest of her, may have some time to come back later on, will see!
she is fine!!!
Also, good Chun Li - I guess. If you're into hot chicks that is.