Her arms need work. I've never seen anyone with an indent in there arm like that. I think you were trying to create what's called the antecubital fossa with those indents, but they don't look like that. Also her arms don't really seem to have any muscle definition and look way too scrawny considering the rest of her body…
Just curious, why are you limiting yourself to 1 month? I'd say progress is good but if you're already at 2 weeks, don't rush to finish in the next 2 weeks. The likeness and proportions both need work. She looks rather thick for Gal. As for her face, it's really hard to give crits without seeing more ref. One thing to keep…
Hello again, Another long stretch between posts but I have made progress. I changed the default pose to a more relaxed stance. This helped with the cloth simulation on the sleeves and it will work better for her animation purposes. I also did a bunch of "behind the scenes" work on her base mesh changing some of the…
Looking better overall, but it needs direction. Remove the color. It's distracting. Soften the planes you made, especially at the temples. It's good that you've notice them, but they're usually not that sharp. I'm still not seeing a likeness. Your eye silhouette needs to match the eye silhouette of hers. You have a decent…
Off to a rockin start! Crits: Nostriles are too big, not enough bulb in the tip of the nose. The indent where the nose meets the browline is kind of missing. I'm not sure if you're going for a Mr Incredible sort of nose but I think adding that indent will make her slightly more attractive. Features seem pretty strong, just…
My first post, is something I whipped up but never completed entirely. The idea was to take a cartoon character ie sailormoon, and try to make a 3d representation. I didn't want to go cartoony. or be too literal in my "tribute" to the character. I also decided that if I was going to make her semi realistic I would not make…
Hello everyone. I scribbled my way through a bunch of ideas. Originally I wanted to do something with Illaoi, then something more general about champions from Bilgewater, but none of those really worked and so I switched the champion to Tristana. At first I wanted to make a group picture of her with a somewhat redesigned…
To whom it may concern, Hello there! I have been working on an in game model currently, and have come across a slight issue that I would like to take up wtih everyone here. What I am trying to learn, is how to get a long flat polygon that's wide (resembling a cape or a bed sheet.) and make it flow. I am also wondering,…
Starting a new thread which is to focus on my 3D pipeline on my original character, Mecha Malory, aka 'Servo Vixen'. Part of a larger universe. So I have had an idea for her for a few years, I finally finished her and entered her into last year's Art War 2017 on Cubebrush.co. Here is my concept: Then I took Genesis V1, and…
I was always a real big fan(hah) of old Karma. I'm still sad that she isn't around and I can't play her so I wrote a story about the Noxus invasion of Ionia and how she stopped it. I always found that the thematics of original Karma's kit encompassed the spirit of Ionia so much better than her current kit. Hard to really…