Thats wickedly better dude! Looks far more thought out in terms of structure. Dont forget to show that the pole is stuck in the concrete too like you did with the poles in the metal. Even if its just a water stain dripping down the concrete were the pole meets, it still grounds it in.
I think the red pipes on the concrete wall are poping too much. Before when they were just in the mountains/over the grass it worked to bring the eye back to those mountains. Right now it just locks my eyes in on that big, boring concrete wall. Looking very nice otherwise.
I'd get more definition in the walls. Make it look like the wall paper is on top of the concrete and add some depth to the concrete itself. Add mesh detail for this if you can otherwise a normal map will suffice. I'd also break up the floor with some broken planks or a rug or two.