Spear Dancer. Need yor feedback

StepanSuvorov · Jan 2021

Hello everyone! My first work for portfolio. I would be glad to hear your feedback. More renders here: https://www.artstation.com/stepanas

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Brian "Panda" Choi · Jan 2021

Her arms are far too thin to suggest she is great at holding and wiledingg that spear. I'd thicken them up with attention to which muscle masses are specifically used. reference martial artist using staves, etc.

StepanSuvorov · Jan 2021

Thank you! Never thought about it.

jose.fuentes · Jan 2021

is that her final skin color? something about it feels off to me

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This character has a similar skin tone, and it feels more fleshy, alive... perhaps, if you have time you can take another stab at the skin

StepanSuvorov · Jan 2021

Thanks for your advice! I'll try to fix this.

Spear Dancer. Need yor feedback

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