The english language has so many words that these sentances could be stated in many different ways but give the same meaning.
Ex:
4) the heralds of evil
the messengers of evil
the scouting forces of evil
Are these all separate statments? Or are they ment to be said as a discriptive sentance.
Ex:
Below the human city falls asleep not knowing this night will be their last night of restistance. The herablds of evil, shadows of death have infiltrated the city to reap a crop of blood. To end this war once and for all...
HAIL POLYCOUNT! THE FORCES OF EVIL!
I don't quite know why you choose "human city" to reference the "enemies city", its alittle confusing considering some of polycounts forces are human and not all CGChat, CGSociety or 3DTotal are all human.
Hope this helps, I kinda found it hard to understand what you are asking for.
thx alot !! you exactly get what i was asking for! and you answered me.. thx again!
when i post the final shots you will understand why i was asking this
and jap "human city" comes from the look of the city.. 'cyborg citys' and 'ancient citys' have a different look .. so i´v decieded to give our oldest enemy the honor .. the humans
hope they will like it
and thx again.. !!! you helped me aaaalooooot ..;)
This one snuck up on me. I really like the winning pose render. His silhouette is fantastic with those wings. I am not too sure about the insanely secret-of-the-ooze-green comic style panels you did. The matte painting could have been executed a lot better. Great job overall, though.
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if a native english speaker wants to say this.. how would he say it?
1:
The Human City is going to sleep..
2:
... not knowing this will be their last night of resistance ...
3:
... shadows have just infiltrated the city ...
4:
... the heralds of the evil force ...
5:
... to end this war once and for all
for POLYCOUNT!
it shouldn´t be longer than this and in the way commic strips are written
thx
Ex:
4) the heralds of evil
the messengers of evil
the scouting forces of evil
Are these all separate statments? Or are they ment to be said as a discriptive sentance.
Ex:
Below the human city falls asleep not knowing this night will be their last night of restistance. The herablds of evil, shadows of death have infiltrated the city to reap a crop of blood. To end this war once and for all...
HAIL POLYCOUNT! THE FORCES OF EVIL!
I don't quite know why you choose "human city" to reference the "enemies city", its alittle confusing considering some of polycounts forces are human and not all CGChat, CGSociety or 3DTotal are all human.
Hope this helps, I kinda found it hard to understand what you are asking for.
when i post the final shots you will understand why i was asking this
and jap "human city" comes from the look of the city.. 'cyborg citys' and 'ancient citys' have a different look .. so i´v decieded to give our oldest enemy the honor .. the humans
hope they will like it
and thx again.. !!! you helped me aaaalooooot ..;)
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