[WIP] Ollie, quidditch player - Critics needed

Marinc

Hi there!
It's my first time posting here so, I'm hoping to not do any mistakes.

Feel free to critique, help, give tips and advices ! Thank you so much, it's really appreciated !

So let me present to you, Ollie ! She's a quidditch player of 23 YO, I've been working on her since ... we'll say december for the first concepts. (She's a character I'm playing)

RECENT WORK :

Goal is : Modelling, Rigging and Animation (plus Simulation) through the year.

So first , the main concept as she was younger and also, her character sheet.

Marinc

Now let's bring some 3D, you can check the not clean sculpt here : https://skfb.ly/6MMGI
But here we go with some scren ! Working on blender.

Marinc

Now I started the topology to clean the model and bring her to a most efficient work in rigging.
The body seems not to bad as a low poly one (I'm going to at least subdivide once more for rigging)
You can see WIP here : https://skfb.ly/6MWQC

Marinc

I'm most concerned about the face, can't seem to find a way to do clean eyes and nose ! Any tips and help will be really nice ! Thanks ! I feel like I'm losing her shape (well the bottom part of the same seems not too bad, but for the rest...)

Marinc

OK so ! I decided to work on the broomstick today !

So here we go :

Did a lot on Maya, I'm gonna sculpt wood on Blender and the "broom" part too !

Marinc

It's been a long time but here we are again ! Topology starting to look like something, I still have work to do on it !

Arms and Legs: