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  • pixelpatron
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    Beautiful stuff, while I wouldn't mind seeing a little more separation between elements. The shots where the flowers are a little more spaced out and placed in clusters are more successful. When the whole scene is over taken by them it starts to get a little too busy. Examples....


    TOO MUCH
    Could be a case of less is more. (meaning group these details of flowers/foliage together, or remove some to expose more architecture) For example, just having a part of the top of this bridge show through, or removing the flowers on the left...I didn't even see the ladder the first time looking at this image...

    Just having one of those windows on the bottom left have the flowers lessened or removed would do wonders,  and the same could be said about the back...I can't really identify what that that white thing is. 


    REALLY GOOD MIX OF ELEMENTS
    These shots show a really good balance of architecture, prop placement, lighting, and natural elements. There are areas for the eye to rest and less is more.



    Still an amazing scene though.
  • JamesBrisnehan
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    @pixelpatron, You bring up some good points. Looking at it now, some of the shots are kind of busy. I guess I did go a little over-board with the flower placement in some areas, ha ha. I'm not sure I want to move around anything in the scene at this point, but I'll keep your advice in mind for future projects. Thanks :) 
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    ...and the same could be said about the back...I can't really identify what that that white thing is. 


    @pixelpatron Do you mean this?
     


    That's the pergola arbor with magenta bougainvillea growing on it outside the first restaurant. I was thinking of having a shot that would act as a sort of lead-up or transition between the main street and that terrace restaurant but I had trouble finding a composition I liked, so that shot ended up on the cutting room floor. Ha ha, oops.

  • franman
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    I wish I was chill'n there.
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