Eric Chadwick said:
Hi Kay, neat work! I think it might help to add labels to your sketches, if the intent is to provide a concept for someone to build as a 3D piece? For example in the last sketch, it's hard to tell what the rows of hanging things are in the upper floor. Are they bee hives? Punching bags? Fungus farms? Hanging sausages with fruit slices stuck in them?One common shortcut is to do a callout sketch with more detail. You've started one for the hanging things, but you really haven't added enough detail to visually explain what it is. You could add a text callout like "hanging fungus farm" and some explanatory text further explaining it's a fabric bag filled with soil, with mushroom growths. You could also use photos in your callouts, as a shorthand instead of re-painting them. Just some ideas. Hope it helps!
Keep it up! Your work is keep getting better and better!
May I take a shot at creating a 3D version of your "Unlicensed Surgey" concept some time down the road. For portfolio building purposes only and I'd credit you of course.Thanks.