damn looking good!
try get some more details in the buildings, then it'll look even better! xD
not sold on the smoke though, it looks a bit like ribbons waving in the air, some cloud like texture would probably look better! or is the smoke like that in the game?
If you're still looking for stuff to add, how about those small vents that rats can go through? I noticed you have some in your scene. (You might already have meant this by 'sewer area')
Maybe make Corvo's blade thinner? Add Kingsparrow feathers on a roof ledge? Maybe change the floor the rats are on to a different texture? What about a dumpster, they're quite distinct in the game. Or even a boat in the sewer area perhaps. Just ideas.
Nice job so far, but I'm interested in what it's going to look like after your lighting pass (like what you did to the roof). Everything is really bright and cheery looking right now, far from the miserable, dreary look I remember from the trailer (haven't played the game yet).
I think it looks really good but you may want to double check about your alphas with whoever is running the contest. The rules thing made it seem like it's B&W alphas only, no greyscale.
awesome really loving it,
the faces off the characters may need a bit more texture space
I love that the wales are flying around just to put them in the scene! xP
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try get some more details in the buildings, then it'll look even better! xD
not sold on the smoke though, it looks a bit like ribbons waving in the air, some cloud like texture would probably look better! or is the smoke like that in the game?
This is what the roof will look like with the faked lighting applied
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Still got a way to go yet but its getting there! Any crit would be appreciated
In the game you'll occasionally see this plague symbol on a sign or painted on a wall, perhaps you could add this to your scene too?
- Weeper's
- Faked Lighting
- Sewer area
- Alpha tweaks
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As always, any critique would be appreciated.
If you're still looking for stuff to add, how about those small vents that rats can go through? I noticed you have some in your scene. (You might already have meant this by 'sewer area')
Maybe make Corvo's blade thinner? Add Kingsparrow feathers on a roof ledge? Maybe change the floor the rats are on to a different texture? What about a dumpster, they're quite distinct in the game. Or even a boat in the sewer area perhaps. Just ideas.
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Thanks!
@Spacey
Here is the lighting so far.
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first pass. Still need to do the props and fix some of the roof. What do you guys think?
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the faces off the characters may need a bit more texture space
I love that the wales are flying around just to put them in the scene! xP
Like the fact there's more details to find when you zoom out too.
I checked with adam and he said its okay. If you check the Rules update transparency is allowed.
Thanks guys glad you like it
Its happening to everyones submissions so its a problem with Sketch Fab. Works fine in the forum version.