Azkur's Crap

Azkur

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UE4 skin experiment

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Hey guys i been posting all my stuff on the What are you working on thread but i end up never getting much feedback there so i thought i would just create a thread where i can post my current projects and work in progress so i could get some feedback.

FEEL FREE TO BE AS BRUTAL WITH THE FEEDBACK AS YOU WANT!

from most recent to oldest work in progress:

Female study:


took that study and started a texture exercise, really trying to push what i can do: (will be posting update later)


For the dragonball challenge i been working on Cell and Korin







Trying to do a character for a next gen portfolio still need to change some stuff in this guy:



Dino, still working on the rest of the body:




thats all i have been working on lately. now i need to finnish them up

Grubber

Neat work! Maybe dino's eyes are too small?

Demomode

awesome azkur. cell sculpt is great.

wester

sweet jesus i love that cell! Such a great interpertation!

Azkur

Thanks everyone i really need to move with all the projects and get them done, i cant really touch the cell until i get my new heatsink or risk melting my cpu rendering it.

update of the chick texturing exercise:

Kridian

Azkur wrote: »

FEEL FREE TO BE AS BRUTAL WITH THE FEEDBACK AS YOU WANT!

Crap, crap & more crap.

:poly004:

Beautiful sculpts dude! Carry on!

Azkur

thanks man!

Quack!

Oh you made a thread, how cute!

Azkur

Hey guys i didnt want to show this yet since i am not happy with it yet but this is a old work that i started tweaking and decided to Finnish and i am having trouble deciding which one i like most, i am inclined to the last 2 but its hard to choose between 2 and 3, what do you guys think?

_DeadPixel_

Nice, just seen you post this guy in Lunchcrunch.
I prefer #1 because it looks stronger which suits his physique more, but I prefer the silhouette of #3.

Quack!

One has the best expression of form, strong and bulky. Great start bud.

Cheathem

Dude,fucking sick.Love that drooling insect creature thing.As for you last post, id have to go with #1 too.

Azkur

adding more layers into the armor still blocking out the shoes and figuring out what works and what doesn't and still need to come up with his main weapon. feedback welcome

Muzzoid

oooh looks really cool man!

Azkur

thanks man

Azkur

hey guys here is an update. i am still working on the face and adding detail in general.

MrRagingSunshine

Looking pretty great man, I love the detailing you've done on him so far!

Azkur

thanks man i am still working on it and its far from finished so i will be posting something soon

Azkur

i don't do 2d stuff but i was bored and inspired by an artist i saw today so i did a quick minimalist poster for Destiny

Azkur

Messing with the hair cards i suck at it but going to start refining the hair soon

Azkur

2 pass on the hair cards

aajohnny

Nice work! not crap at all

Azkur

Thanks man, still a lot i need to fix though i now notice i didnt work in her neck at all it looks weird

Goeddy

nice work, but yeah the skin on her neck realy looks uneven.
also the eyebrows look realy blocky, maby try a different photosource for them.

would you mind posting a wireframe shot of your hairplanes?
i would like to take a look at your technique cause your hair looks very smooth.

Azkur

thanks Goeddy! yeah i am working on her and i will post some screens of the hair stuff later but basically i work with them with the smooth preview on maya on and then later on actually smooth them, including uvs and edit the topo to lower it if its too high.

meanwhile the Dragonball z constest is ending tomorrow so here is the last Wip shot before final

Azkur

derp a derp!

Azkur

lowres mostly done

Azkur

small texture update, still very wip but its getting there

Borgleader

I came here expecting crap, I only found awesome stuff. I am disappoint

Azkur

sorry to disapoint i will make sure to do my best and do something more disapointing xD

chudork

awesome stuff, that demon/monster thing looks great

lotet

everything is amazing!
but the demon eye blue glowing vein thingy is kinda cheese and looks kinda noobish in my opinion, you can do better then that.

Selaznog

lotet wrote: »

everything is amazing!
but the demon eye blue glowing vein thingy is kinda cheese and looks kinda noobish in my opinion, you can do better then that.

^Took the words right out of my mouth!

Maybe if it were less messy and followed the flow of veins?



(but better than that xD)

BradMyers82

The blue veins look "noobish" because they are very weak (small thin) and definitely overdone. I would use far less, and make them stronger (large bold strokes) that taper a lot and have interesting direction. I would have them crack the face more and possibly show damage to the underlying muscle tissue, rather than just be superficial. you could have one break thru the lip for example.

Anyway, great job here, I especially like your female study. That sculpt is very very well done. keep up the good work!

Azkur

ey guys thanks for the feedback! i am not sure the glow is going to be there or not but i think its contrasts nicely with the dark color scheme, anyway i will take your guys feedback into account and thanks for taking the time to wright it :P

meanwhile i been working on a likeness/anatomy study of Alistair Overeem

JamesArk

Big fan of Reem, great start so far

Azkur

thanks i will update soon with full body

Stormfreek

Some sick work here man, the latest sculpt looks awesome and clean!

Bertmac

I realy like your work, but overveen is a bit off. or did you use refs from before he took 6 shots a day in his ass

Azkur

thaks guys! Bertmac: i dont know i am not a huge mma fan xD there are some photos where he is thinner and others where he is fatter so i am not sure

BradMyers82

Actually, I think you are pretty close with the likeness but he is a bit overly developed in a few areas and under developed in the lats.
Here is what I would change…
- I would make his shoulders a tad wider but NOT increase the volume of his delts. His skeletal frame is a tad wider in general.
- Give his face a bit more mass (its more bloated looking) and increase his head size slightly
- Give him slightly bigger lats by actually carving into his rib cage a bit (basically the area right outside the nipple should be moved in some.
- Shorten up his torso some (belly button should be higher)
- Carve out the insertion point between the bicep and forarm and bring the overall bicep size down some.
- Make his traps smaller
- Bring his clavical up slightly
- Shoulders not stretched so much vertically (sitting up higher)
- Little more volume to the neck

Overall really great job man!

Quack!

Good stuff sexy man. I can see you advance with each new asset. Keep it up!

Azkur

hey guys i totally lost focus after i took a 2 week vacation but i am trying to get back on rails so i am trying to focus on finishing this stuff

small update

seth.

Overeem is looking solid man, his cranium feels a little high perhaps?....I want to see more of the blue veiny guy, he was coming along really well

Azkur

thanks man! mmm maybe you are right although that might be the air making it look high either way i am going to check it out, yeah i need to finish that guy but like i said i am trying to get back into the rhythm and then i will finish him!

Pabs

good thread

Azkur

Scapulator:thanks man i appreciate it

just a small update on the other guy, pushing my self to finish him i still want to mess with the blood in the hands and the overall skin variation as well some stuff here and there but plz if you have any feedback that would be great.

Azkur

hey guys so i am updating my folio and will start applying for jobs soon (all of these characters are going to be in it) but here is the first one i think is near final quality, i really would like to get some feedback on it (presentation, post, etc...) as i want it to be the best it can be on my folio. anyway hope you guys like it

Azkur

hey guys i updated my folio, i still need to finish a bunch of stuff but its getting there, i will start applying for jobs really soon. meanwhile i started working on this chick 3 days ago and its been a blast working on her but i might have gotten a bit to enthusiastic and made her breasts a tad bigger than they should be xD

Azkur

update on the chick based of all the feedback i got.
feel free to point out what you don't like or share ideas you might have

ILLMATICC

The girl is looking awesome man i love the way you've done the hoodie. I feel like the thighs are too thin though, i think they taper inwards too soon on the inside of the leg under the crotch. I wouldn't curve it inwards until about halfway down the thigh. Hope that makes sense.