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Hey this is really cool! I think it's good that you have a strong plan going forward. I think there are only two things still holding this scene back though - the UV distortion on the rug, and not quite enough time spent on the lighting. If you look at the original concept, there's a lot of bloom on the lighting, and they actually reflect in the floor and window. In other compositions it wouldn't be quite so important, but this scene is really being carried by the very bright lights and very dark shadows.GroovyDaft0 said:
I’d love to hear your comments and critiques. Thanks for all the feedback and support during this challenge, it’s been an awesome learning experience!



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