the taper you have on the neck shouldn't be mirrored - it goes in on the left side but out on the right because she's turning her head toward the camera while her shoulders aren't facing it. the tapering on your model makes her look a little alienish.
Whoa! Long time no post! Working on a punk girl now, lots of learning and experimenting! Also a fast and rough colour mock up to her rough concept and the logo to go on the back of her jacket so you all know her colourwise.
Thx bbox & fabio, that is no hair is an little bug that is controlled by her ,but is somehow attracted to her backhead with an sort of field. I made the screenshots in a hurry, i waned mainly to present her in the video. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9jSPIOc8SBA&feature=youtu.be
As it stands, I think it's too close to her default colors. If you made her hair white into blue and changed the color of her scarf it'd read more as a snow day skin. Looking forward to seeing more updates! Good luck :)
Cool concept, I think you could take a look at the art from "APB: Reloaded" Anatomy wise I'd pulled her shoulder back and tilt her chest/rib cage up and back. Currently her posture is quit poor.
the body looks alright but the face needs lots of work. I suggest widening her hips a little bit though. Her nose looks to be a bit too small, and her lips look kind of flat, can we see closeups of the face?
Also adjust the size of her hands, and her weight balance as well as her arm muscles. Most likely still missing a lot of issues. I think she DOES look more HEROIC though. OMG, instant visual improvement. What is this magic.
i think it works by sucking the milk and then spinning it at near light speed in the mini particle accelerator around her boobs and then once enough energy has been gathered, it shoots it through the big tube over her shoulder and into her jetpack. cool stuff
Latest 15/12/23: --- Started a face sculpt months ago and decided to make a full character. I'm planning to get her in UE4 and originally I was going to do an xgen hair groom but I think I might do cards and try and GS Curves tool. Honestly, just seeing where this character takes me. Long term I'd like to use her for hair…
What is that dark sphere behinf her head ? Also, pay attention to the space between her legs, right now it's barely there which makes it look undecided....kinda. Plus, the sword is parallel to the shield and her body. You might wanna work on that, too.