The size of your presenting image is way too big. It doesn't have to be that large. Your foliage could use some work. The cards along the walls don't have any depth to them. Looks like you just stuck them there. Along with hanging leaves along the ceiling. The vertex painting seems off. It just suddenly ends. Have it fade…
Inkalicious sorry about the image size, haven't posted up here in a while and pulled the screens from my blog. I agree that the foliage definitely needs another pass to give it some more depth. The vertex painting hasn't really gotten too much attention yet and yes that patch of grass looks way off. The mud and window…