Looks like your proportions are a bit funky. Not sure where exactly though. And his right hand/arm looks kind of awkward. (When I try to put my arm into that pose it hurts, so my guess would be that it isn't a natural pose). Also, like tumerboy said, it doesn't look like he's supporting his weight with his right arm.…
only two things that caught my eye (though I'm no character artist) 1) it was hard for me to figure out what his right arm was doing. I got it after a few seconds, but that's a few seconds too long. I'm not sure exactly what needs to be done to fix it (again, not a character guy) and 2) the left arm/wrist/hand combo…
rooooooster! hey man, glad to see you getting ready to bring your A-game for the dominance war! as far as what you've going on here, i like seeing that you're continuing along with your digital paintery stuff... but be careful. my crit comes from a constant battle of my own when it comes to concepting, and that's the…