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1. An Animated Short Movie - Any feedback welcome -)

   

   Topic by Katmart · Oct 2017 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hello, this animated short film is a combination of a hand-keyed animation and a motion capture. The final story contains several playblasts as well as finished parts.I would appreciate any feedback, regarding to my short film to be able to finish it in the future. Thank you. SHORT…

2. Re: An Animated Short Movie - Any feedback welcome -)

   

   Reply by ajramsey28 · Oct 2017 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hi, I think your short idea is pretty cute! I know this is a wip but are you working on this on your own? If so try to focus on one thing at a time, follow the animation pipeline. Make sure animation is solid before lighting and rendering. I agree with what EVernier said above, use more time to study the refs, some of the…

3. Re: An Animated Short Movie - Any feedback welcome -)

   

   Reply by EVernier · Oct 2017 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Looked at your breakdown video and saw that you had some reference, which is really good, especially for complex movements like you're doing. I'd suggest taking more time to study the refs to get a good understanding of how the body's gonna move and why. The motion capture clip needs to be edited, I noticed the hands and…