Here are some quick notes that I can think of - Texturing is too plain. Assets need more interesting details. Right now you have the broad strokes. You have the shapes, but you don't have any medium and small details. In real life, railings have parts that connect together, they aren't made of one continuous tube (most of…
Well done on asking, its great to see pro active students. It would be good to see your portfolio to help advise on your style, where are you studying out of interest? If your heart is really set on character art then you will need to work really smart, hard and fast over the summer before going into longer projects as…
I continue to evolve my skills with IClone and will work diligently in documenting my progress. Most of my notes are found alongside the YouTube post itself. Here I shall Keep a record of my progress. Toon Characters Using the defacto Stout character, I brought a figure into IC and animated/textured/toned to see what can…
Brad hit some key points, but I'll reiterate/add to them. I can't really tell what anything does in your non-referenced environments, especially the latest one. This is really important. You should have some plan as to how your non decorative forms are following a function. Those conveyor belts, the big fan thing out in…
For the circle tool you mentioned, I would use one or several of the curve tools and the curve tool options such as rebuild curve, you can then choose polygons for the geometry output in case you were trying to build a pipe or tube prop etc. For the "even spaced edge loop" tool problem, if you go to insert edge loop in the…
Overall it just feels very flat, almost diffuse only. I feel like you really need to work on the material definition on this. +lack of contrast in the spec. Maybe you have a reason for this, but I would personally suggest to also use a gloss map, you have quite a lot of different materials on this thing, so it would…
This whole idea of playing the house market is just bad all around. When people use homes as leverage to make quick money like we did in the past decade, it really makes life hard for everybody because with these bubbles they build, it makes owning a home for the traditional purpose of having a roof over your head a pipe…
Hats off to you man. That is a terrifying amount of improvement in 3 days time. One of the things I would try to do with this piece because your piece sits in such a comfortable angle now is perhaps design a room around it. What other equipment is in the room? What does the floor look like? Who is using this and what is…
Hey, good job completing a character! Overall, technically this is a pretty good piece, but a few things struck me when I compared it to the concept. - The pose is super static. Almost looks like you haven't rigged the hands... - Styles are kind of mixed up. The concept was kind of more realistic, strangely, but your…
Alright boys and girls I am about to embark on my first real project, i'm looking forward to getting started and would love your feedback with this as I want to use this project to make some serious strides forward so. I am going to recreate the halfway fortress from Dark Souls 3, it is a fantastic looking area and one…