Michangelo's face looks like he ran into a wall, because his face looks completely flat. Try rounding it out a bit more, especially the top half of the face.
Here's a good cross polarized reference https://www.artstation.com/artwork/zWma2 Can anyone tell me if that's makeup on her face below her eyes on the last image.
her body and face actually look really good! it might be the skinshader/sss or lack thereof in the first shot that makes the face look dead and also the strong AO on her face makes her look a bit mucky like she doesnt wash her face.
Next update for Ira. Woked on cloth seams, folds block out and initial face block out. And some face close ups. I have more eperience with stylized character and faces so making a realistic one is really a challange. Faces are really hard and female faces are the hardest imho. It's still really bad, bad planes and…