not sure if the colour choices were the best,
if you got any critique on how to improve it, its welcome,
colour and atmosphere usually isn't my strongest area when doing 2d.
cool stuff! i like the lightning! i think the shield on his back is placed a bit too far to the back; it looks as if it is only attached to the lower back. (just becouse of the position) other than that i like it! now come up with your own concepts and stuff!
thats neat, about the only thing i don't like is the beak. looks like it could be 'beefed' up a little bit. Not sure that was the best word to use, but i am sure you know what i mean :P Turtle power dudes!
Michangelo's face looks like he ran into a wall, because his face looks completely flat. Try rounding it out a bit more, especially the top half of the face.
i think leo has some issues with anatomy and his stance is lacking weight. michangelo is much better and the third one is col, but watch out for his left arm. it doesn't read well.
i love the homage you're paying to the turtles here!
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#japhir: was thinking more in the line of lighting,
turtles in general have weird necks, to hide their head in their shells.
..would've been cool if you had a palm tree or something in that pic, though. xD
i love the homage you're paying to the turtles here!
i don't know what you mean about lack of weight?
as for slash' arm, how do i make it read better?