It's looking a lot more moody now, though not nearly as dingy as the concept. (I'm aware you're only using it for composition) I feel torn between two different focal points however, the bright yellow lamp and the muted desk lamp. In the concept the focal point is the bright blue light from the window which fades until it…
- in the first image my eye is drawn to the chimney because it’s the most colorful and saturated thing in the scene, and everything else is flat and mute. The lighting is flat and it’s all in a neutral tonal range, nothing stands out as a focal point or point of interest. - the car angle is too straight on, and creates…