Great job on the anatomy, it's clear you really studied the figure on this. The only area that stands out to me that may be incorrect is the abs. The abs seem a bit too flat and large. The flatness might be purely a lighting issue though. Overall, this looks GREAT!
i'd say metal parts still could use more contrast, other than that it looks great. previous works kick ass as well, chess piece has a really convincing anatomy and texture of thief girl shows awesome material definition.
little update changed and refined the fibremesh, made some anatomy changes suggested by Satoshi. Im at a point now where ill start retopo. Entry can be seen here: https://www.artstation.com/contests/ancient-civilizations/challenges/16/submissions/13352
Here is an update. I decided to add some girth to his thighs like shinobix mentioned, and also focused on the anatomy a little more, paying attention to the insertion points from his torso to the arm. Hoping for more helpful crits :) thanks for looking.
You don't need full definition but its smart to spend some time on the base and make sure the proportions are correct and make sense. Too often people rush into armor/clothing etc and end up really falling short on the anatomy of the figure.
cool character, yeah latest shots arent showing, based on the shots I can see I think her torso needs to be longer and slimmer, her chest seems really petite in the concept whereas your model is more believeable anatomy.
Hey guys thanks a lot for the input it's really helpful. I'm diving deeper into anatomy and focusing on sculpting right now. I'm also trying out other softwares in addition to blender. I've noted the weaknesses in my work and I'll get better! ;)
The muscle anatomy isn't bad, but his arms are waaaay too short. I would work on the positioning of the ribcage/torso and the overall shape and size of the cranium. This is defiantly an ambitious project. I would focus on getting solid proportions before blazing into the clothing.
Hanska - It's been a while since I've been doing anatomy studies and I guess it's showing. :) Guess it's time to hit the tablet and get back in the habit of doing one every day. Thanks for the pointers. Cholden - Brutal, but fair. I'll take it on board.
I allowed myself some time off for the holiday season, now I'm back on it! The head and body are retopo'd now, some anatomy issues fixed, now I can start figuring out how I want to layer her dress