space commander crits wanted

ryuju · May 2007

i started working on this model which i may put into unreal tournament. Im having a little trouble on the arms, have any idea whats wrong with them? Also id like some generals crits on the whole thing. thanks alot.

Josh_Singh · May 2007

Here's a crit, Finish the model.
lol sorry yeah that was harsh. Sometimes I just feel like being a dick.
Could you post a concept so We can see what your aiming for?

almighty_gir · May 2007

ouch... i hope you guys know each other, because that was harsh.

as for the arms, it looks like you might be trying to focus too much on the wrong things, i'd take a look over at the "street fighting man" thread, he got some good arms =]

Slipstream · May 2007

Smooth out the flow you have on your edge loops.Right now you've only got them going in the general direction of the muscles groups; take some time to really hammer down where those lines should be going before moving on.

zenarion · May 2007

Show us the concept!
Something should be done with the transision between his neck and that armor of his.

ryuju · May 2007

ive updated him abit because i realized he looked a little plain. I will try smoothing out those arms tonight.

also here is one of my concepts still working on a frontal one that im happy with.

fritz · May 2007

if you flesh the concept out a bit more...it will help you in the long run. otherwise, you will be forced to make decisions and "see if it looks ok or not". and that can cause lots of wasted time.

Jeremy Lindstrom · May 2007

It sucks when you can't see behind you, can't be a good fighter when you can't look around.

cholden · May 2007

Ever model a people before? Having a base human to model the spaceman suits around will help you here as it's easy to tell the dude underneigth is having some problems. Also, all those crazy armor bits will fall into place better going over natural human anatomy.

space commander crits wanted

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