Congrats on something I've never seen, pretty neat i can see alternatives having a stronger potential, after this one has paved the way for them. AFAIK.
Edit: to add more i think a junkyard scene background with a dim lighting of your choosing might've gone a longer way with presentation, your choice.
With what sacboi said and my mentions if you come back with the textured version and a representational situation you can still make a grand comeback.
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For a setting, a junkyard or an industrial factory area could complement the aesthetic nicely.
Thanks