Na'vi Avatar render (Critique please)

MayaPour · May 2023

Hello, I was working on a personal project recently and wanted to practice my scan data cleaning techniques. I used many references from the most recent film; the bust was rendered in Unreal engine. Any comment/critique for improvement will be greatly appreciated

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wirrexx · May 2023

I am by no means a character artist nor am I anywhere good with anatomy. But if you compare that bust has a lot of anatomy issues. If you break down the characters with for example Loomis method, you would still see a somewhat kind of working anatomy, even how and where the ears are placed. The ears on your character seem way off.

Where the jawline connects to the ear and so on.

look at these examples and human anatomy too. As they are based on a stylized version of the human skull.

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Ze9qRx

https://gamesartist.co.uk/neytiri/

kanga · May 2023

Practice on naked humans, lots of them. You can use Daz 3D as a reference program. It's free.

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Fabi_G · May 2023

The back of the head/ volume behind and under the ear looks off to me.

Na'vi Avatar render (Critique please)

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