This is my first go at a cartoon style character. I modeled it after my Girlfriend that I haven't been able to see in 4 months because of the current situation.
Her arm appear to be broken around elbow -> strange zig zag pattern
You have create such an intricate negative shape that nothing can compare to it which shifts the point of view and initial intentions if you look closer its bunch of aggressive triangles ,negative shapes matter either fix that or pick different angle
Also I would recommend one more pass on her face more specifically nose lips jaw line
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