Alex' improvement topic critics welcome !

alex_perriere · Mar 2020

Hi, I'm new in the community, I see a lot of amazing work here and I'd love to be a concept artist one day, I'm in an animation school and I thought it could be cool if I post my progression here. I have a lot to learn and critics are welcomed and appreciated !

I am a fantasy lover so you'll see a lot of knight and castle I think

(oh and I'm french so sorry if my english is terrible)

This piece is my last one (and certainly the one I've past way too much time) it's the best that I can do for now I think

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/5w/ae2de0uhu0e8.png

under is the first two hour of my drawing (speedpaint)

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/a0/x1901s8k6yyk.png

Will_Maccabe · Mar 2020

Nice composition. To improve this I would concentrate on the anatomy of the arms and work a bit more detail into the boots. Also, his left arm and shoulder region and cape draping over this could do with improvement as it makes him look a bit hunch back (i.e. bring the cape downwards and sort the arm). Hope it helps.

Alex' improvement topic critics welcome !

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