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Better make this a sculpt sketchbook thread now.

Base anatomy sculpting.

*Current progress*



Took a break from male body sculpt as was getting too zoned out working on the same thing too much. Gonna get back to finish it soon I hope.


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  • vavavoom
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  • bkost
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    Looks like you're having fun. The idea of bashing star wars/space cowboy designs with realistic animals is great.
    It's as if you're taking a character like Admiral Ackbar and setting him in our world.

    Reminds me of the fish newscaster from Spongebob lmao



    Please be careful with designing from your head. This can reinforce bad habits. You must use reference if you want to breathe life into these characters and make them believable. That can range from clothing, fish, scale patterns, hardsurface armor. I suggest picking up the app, Pureref and begin building your visual library. 

    Cheers
  • vavavoom
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    Thanks @bkost

    Yeah, that makes good sense. Will definitely look to references to further push the characters, especially for detailing.

    It is fun 'bashing' away and seeing what sticks as I don't feel so much pressure on myself to produce something that is comparable to a given character concept drawing in terms of matching it.

    I'll get back to finishing the other project I'm almost done with before pushing these any more, as I'll never get a full project actually finished...

    Hope to make some more characters like these soon...
  • vavavoom
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    Today's sculpt bash/concept character thing...


  • vavavoom
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    reworked the first 2 characters proportions to make them less 'cartoony' and to better match the last one, which is more the proportions and style I want.
    Tried to screengrab them to give a sense of comparative size to each other side by side (only got MS paint at work, so not great but I hope it gives a better sense)


  • Crazy_pixel
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    Xd the yellow one is great, I hope he has some kind of waterpistol!
    Keep it up :)
  • vavavoom
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    Ha~ thanks :)

    I was thinking more laser guns and spaceships in a sci-fi fantasy world when I was making these, but anything goes
    ~~

    So many ideas and characters to make, so little time and knowledge... I'd love to polish and finish these all up, make an environment.... dreams~~~~
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    Continuing from yesterdays sculpt...
    Gonna start blocking out the rest of the body next to get a better handle on proportions.

  • vavavoom
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    Posted at top of thread, not sure where's best to get CC...

  • MMKH
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    Nice sculpt so far. How does the back look? IMHO, he could use some lat muscles. For example, the area behind the underarms, perhaps make it protrude slightly. :)
  • vavavoom
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    Thanks @MMKH
    Yeah, that's a good spot. I didn't make as much progress today as i'd hoped. The back doesn't really have have much going on at the moment. I spent today's sculpt practice trying to tie down overall proportions , particularity the waist and hips are hard work...  The body lost a lot of mass as I tried to improve posture and anatomy, i'll bulk him up again after I give the legs and back more sculpting.
    Here's today's effort...

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    Today's sculpt was only the hand. Hands are the part I find most difficult.

    Fingers quite chunky, but they'll be made thinner on next pass. Thinking to retopo at this stage to start clean it up and work on details if anatomy is ok...

    Took half a day to just get it to this stage...



    ...I see a lot of really nice character models let down by poor looking hands. I wonder if hands are generally considered the most difficult part among artists out there?   I guess it's each to their own, but i'd be curious to find out...
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  • Temppe
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    I think his legs are too long dude. Have you measured how many heads long the greater trochanter is from the floor? Ryan Kingslien says it's four, though you could push it a bit more if you want heroic proportions maybe.
  • vavavoom
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    Thanks @Temppe
    Yeah, I should probably put a ref image plane into Zbrush from now to get better proportions.
    Here's today's effort...

    Looks nicer in perspective view than ortho... I can't put my finger on it, but it feels off somehow in ortho view....

    Maybe the pose is too unnatural?
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  • kanga
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    Just my opinion. The details look ok. The skull looks good but the face feature proportions are too small. The chest looks deflated and too small for the character length. Its hard to sculpt a figure that is standing straight. You can relax it a bit by pushing the pelvis  forward and letting the figure compensate for the slight weight shift, plus bending the arms forward slightly.

    If you are in zBrush a neat trick is to place a program like poser or daz under neath and make the zB interface transparent (you can do that with a slider top right of the UI). That way its easier to check your volumes.
  • Al13nHand
    Oh damn that's a neat trick I never thought of that
  • kanga
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    Yeah its good for getting the general layout. It works well if you take your figure down to the lowest sub D level, that is if it isn't a dynamesh base. BTW I meant bend the arms a bit at the elbow.

    Cheers
  • vavavoom
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    Thanks @kanga

    adjusted pose and proportions, then went into some detailing. Gotta fix the lower back, got a bit messy when I was making proportion adjustments.

    Will focus on the hands and feet on the next pass.

    Gonna work on the face as soon as body is completely finished, I'll attach it and work on the features more to make it better then.

    Hope this is a step up in progress... 




  • kanga
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    lookin better!
  • vavavoom
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    Thanks @kanga

    Today's sculpt practice I spent ages tidying up , adding more detail but ended up unsatisfied with the result.... I couldn't get it looking right, it started looking worse.

    So, instead of spending more hours going round in circles, I grabbed a decent looking ref from Google (sorry can't find the artist name, I used Google image search) and went about sculpting my existing model into the ref.

    Here's the result:

    The ref:


    I would have loved to have got mine looking nice without directly copying someone else's sculpt as reference, but I realized that wasn't gonna happen and I would waste more time going in circles. Aside from the arms position, the feet, hands and head, the body is a direct attempt at the ref.  It's not finished yet, but I feel I made some progress today.
  • vavavoom
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    Continuing from Yesterday's progress,
    Grabbed a different ref (real life this time) with different body style to challenge myself to keep pushing anatomy learning.


  • kanga
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    Everything looks pretty good but there is still some strange stuff that is interfering with the result. You have a pretty good eye but with anatomy you only have to be a bit out and the result will look weird.


    It looks like you are using the dynamesh system for your sculpt. While this is a truly terrific approach it is more suited to experienced artists and when starting with figures it doesnt allow you to change the resolution of the mesh while sculpting. You can start off with dynamesh and then remesh it at anytime and remesh will give you pretty good topology but I like to  send my base mesh to a 3d app to edit it to make it easier to work with. While you can freeze subD levels and use the modelling brush to edit your mesh in zB, it doesn't always work.


    I use GoB to send my mesh to Blender to edit it. GoB is a variation of zBrush's GoZ utility. You can use GoZ with a number of existing 3d applications. When in Blender I make sure the mesh has a continuous center loop then delete a half side of the mesh and fix any loop issues, add a mouth cavity, add eye, ear and mouth loops, and remove excess loops from the arms, legs and hands. Then use a symmetry modifier to reestablish the edited half. Sending your model to an outside application isn't really necessary. I just like it as I find it easier to sculpt from a good base mesh.

    Characters are based on reality and they are variations of that. DAZ is free and the Genisis figure base is a fantastic system that allows you to change parameters like pose, muscularity, figure part sizes and for sculpting reference you can switch off the textures and control specularity if you want.

    I have a cheap monitor connected and placed next to my laptop which I use for reference material while I am sculpting. The figure above I posed with the hips slightly forward, the feet are tilted down a little at the toes for heeled shoes in the final stages, the head tilted so the face is in a horizontal position with the head scaled down just a bit to add vizual height to the model and the arms are in an A pose with forearms bent slightly forward. I switched off the textures and lowered the specularity so the figure isnt so shiny. This is a good pose as its relaxed and helps lend the figure optical weight and is more pleasant to sculpt than a ridgid pose.


    In DAZ I hid the left arm and leg so I could get a clear picture of the torso side view and the inner leg and foot. The other side view gives me a reference for the outside of the arm and leg. If you draw a center line down the middle of the figure it should be balanced to compensate for the slight forward position of the hips. In DAZ you can switch to front side and top and bottom views then hit Cntrl + F to place the figure in the center of the viewport at the right size for screen shots.


    In zBrush you can set up reference planes and edit their scale and position under the draw menu. The above shot is in perspective but to use the planes switch to orthographic view and while orbiting press shift to snap to a view.


    The model becomes transparent and allows you to see through it. Take your model down to its lowest subD level and use the move brush to make adjustments.

    Hope this helps.


  • vavavoom
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    Thanks @kanga , that's great advice much appreciated. I'm now reading through it to see if and how I can apply it.


    I had started in dynamesh at the very early stages, but projected it onto my cleaner base mesh a while back. It's quite a bit messy now cause of pushing/pulling as I worked on it more. Once it's complete, I'll re-project it onto a nice clean base mesh again.




    Again, thanks so much @kanga for taking the time for help and advice, I'll read through it again tomorrow when I'm refreshed :) 
  • vavavoom
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    Dang it...

    after posting, i realized I had fudged up the groin/hips....

    So, here goes again...

    I'll try finish it up tomorrow...


  • vavavoom
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    Smoothed it out some and worked on the pose and forms more.
    I lost the details on the torso, but I hope the pose and forms are better and it looks more appealing overall. I really want to start more high res detailing from now, if everything is correct...


    *Just noticed the chest seems way to flat....   why I always spot these things in posted images that I never see in the actual Zbrush program whilst I'm modelling?!!
  • vavavoom
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    Hi @JustAfterDark,
    I've been super consumed trying to finish this anatomy model so haven't checked in your work lately ;)

    I already mentioned it's not in dynamesh (a few posts above). I have been tweaking the pose using the method described.

    I'm pretty happy with it now, just a few more detail passes , particularity the legs and back and I think I'll be finally satisfied...

    I should fix the head soon though, I think it doesn't match the body well and it's throwing it off a little.

    Thanks, for having a look~~~~
  • vavavoom
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    Detail pass. Progress was slow today....head still a long way off, gonna focus on it next pass. 


  • carvuliero
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    Few suggestions that might help improve on what you already have

  • vavavoom
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    carvuliero  !

    I didn't get much done on the body today. worked on:
    4. Clavicle
    5. S and C profile shape

    I spent today working on the fixing the horrible place holder head. It think it was ruining the overall look of the sculpt. It was really starting to bug me looking at it. I had to do something about it.

    So, I had a go at making a 'generic' head to give it a better look. It's still needs plenty of work, but it fits the body better and is much more pleasant to look at.
    Gonna try attach it to the body into a complete mesh tomorrow to work on the neck and focus back on the body next, work more on the head later...  need to scale it up though, it's pretty small right now.

    Gonna work on your pointers some more tomorrow~~~


    Here's the torso I've been using as ref:

    Unfortunately the ref isn't full body, I really should have found a full body ref to use.... but I really liked this body physique and wanted to try and emulate it as best possible for my sculpt...

    Thanks again!
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    Had to fix the head... it looked so weird before. As such I didn't had time to work on the body more, so I'm gonna get back to it next.

    Don't know how to make eyebrows yet, so stuck a couple of messy extracts for now...


  • vavavoom
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    Wanted to add more detail to the face, give it more character but wasn't sure about the look I wanted exactly at this point... so got a bit sidetracked with following a character reference. Needs a lot more polish, but I really outta get back on track and finish the body sculpt.


  • kanga
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    Looks a lot better!
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  • kanga
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    Here is a ref shot from DAZ in orthographic projection.

    Perhaps your sculpt is correct, but it looks a little alien to me.
  • vavavoom
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    Thanks Kanga,
    I think it's because the reference is from fantasy movie character, he's wearing prosthetic makeup and stuff  I guess..  I got carried away and should have just used a normal head reference, just I thought the character looked so cool....I'll post it up with refs I used when I post on next head work progress.

    For now it's back to the never-ending work of trying to get a decent body sculpt. So went back lo-res and starting carving out the shapes again...

    I matched up all the areas correctly...i think?    I can't work it out, He looks pretty good to me when viewed at any angle other than flat front ortho view. Just seem to not look right when viewed front on in ortho but I can't work out why...it's really bugging me.

    The only thing I can think of is it maybe the arms?  length or position?   should I firstly model them in the ref photo position then position them differently later?

    I should probably clarify the goal of making the body sculpt:
    I want to have a really good body base I can use to make into characters, add clothes, different heads, experiment with different proportions.

    That's why I was trying to make his pose in this way, I tried to copy from other base models I have seen that I think look really good in terms of pose for character designing.

    Thanks~~~~

  • carvuliero
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    I suggest you work solely on side view till there is a nice flow and rhythm and forms are balanced and aesthetically/proportionally pleasing  , adding muscle wont fix design problem
    take special care for :
    - big form orientation
    - contrast lines [high and low points of a form ]
    - thickness relations
    - check proper body alignment


  • vavavoom
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    Thanks carvuliera so much for your continued help~~

    I screengrabbed your paintover and worked the sculpt more. It feels better for sure. I'm gonna start tidying up the sculpt now, work on defining the muscles you highlighted too.


  • vavavoom
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    Today's effort,

    adjusted the head to fit the photo ref better and will model it to from the original photo ref from now.
     
    I will work on the fantasy character head sculpt I got sidetracked with as a separate project at a later time, better to focus on one thing at a time... 

    Also remeshed into a single mesh, so can sculpt the neck better from now.

    Not too concerned with sculpting the face to perfectly match the ref at this time, just enough to help get the body done, then will maybe work on matching the face more closely later...




  • vavavoom
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    Just had a bash at matching the ref photo head today. It's still symmetrical for now, will fix that later after more progress on the body.


  • carvuliero
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    You are welcome
    As you have this nice low res model to work with I suggest to keep working on silhouette do the same thing I showed you on side view for front and back .Once you have proper volume and major rhythm you can start carving muscles
    And if you ask me I wouldn't bettor with face at all its just a distraction if its not done correctly
  • vavavoom
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    Latest effort...
    Added pants to help get more feel of proportions. Will give the face another pass later.
    Think the calf muscles need adjusting lower?



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