Hey Will! I like the wagon, but the presentation could be done a lot better. You have a brown-gray wagon on brown-gray dirt with a gray background. It's a bit of a chore to look at. I'd much rather see this wagon on a green field with a blue sky or something, to provide some contrast and colour variation.
Eric Chadwick said:
Great piece. Also the back light is really dull, hard to see the love you put into it. A nice diorama, three point lighting, and a tighter crop could really help it pop.
Looks way better! I see a repeating pattern in the grass. Can you stick a bolder in the field, to break it up, and a tree or two to break up the horizon?