Personal work - Boxuer

Jappomo · May 2019

Hi, all, before i publish my work, i tought that a round of feedback could help me improve the looking and the presentation of my latest work,
so without further ado, here some screen:

Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/m4/d4spkxh31jt6.jpg

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Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/7b/xt1hif7iapwa.gif

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Image: https://us.v-cdn.net/5021068/uploads/editor/nt/fryd7i9ghork.jpg

Thanks in advance for the feedback, and critiques, looking forward in the mean time i wish you all a good continuation,

cheers,

Jack

badmouse · May 2019

Looks great! I can almost see her in a Beat Em Up style game kicking asses!

m00k · May 2019

Only thing I can think of is too maybe crush some of those midtones and get some more light on her face. Shes fairly evenly lighten right now. Also there seems to be a strange highlight on her right hip, a reflection of your plane light? Other than that nice work!

Jappomo · May 2019

Hey, sorry for the late reply

badmouse said:

Looks great! I can almost see her in a Beat Em Up style game kicking asses!

Thanks man! Was quite the intention at the beginning..to make her look like a character from an Arcade Fighting game.. =D

m00k said:

Only thing I can think of is too maybe crush some of those midtones and get some more light on her face. Shes fairly evenly lighten right now. Also there seems to be a strange highlight on her right hip, a reflection of your plane light? Other than that nice work!

Thanks man for the feedback, i see your point and i will do some tweak on the light for sure, for the hip highlight is because the rimlight get stopped from the jacket, rotating the light a bit i think will do the trick.. (i hope)

=D

Torch · May 2019

Nice style, pose and texture/material definition, love it

kawaiispacekillers · May 2019

that's an awesome sculpt and rendering ! great work on her ! i really like the proportion !

Jappomo · Jun 2019

Thanks guys, appreciated, and i am happy to share with you the final post on Artstation https://www.artstation.com/artwork/lVO2e5

Personal work - Boxuer

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