Personal work - Boxuer

Jappomo

Hi, all, before i publish my work, i tought that a round of feedback could help me improve the looking and the presentation of my latest work, 
so without further ado, here some screen:


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Thanks in advance for the feedback, and critiques, looking forward in the mean time i wish you all a good continuation,

cheers,

Jack

badmouse

Looks great! I can almost see her in a Beat Em Up style game kicking asses!

m00k

Only thing I can think of is too maybe crush some of those midtones and get some more light on her face. Shes fairly evenly lighten right now. Also there seems to be a strange highlight on her right hip, a reflection of your plane light? Other than that nice work!

Jappomo

Hey, sorry for the late reply 

badmouse said:

Looks great! I can almost see her in a Beat Em Up style game kicking asses!

Thanks man! Was quite the intention at the beginning..to make her look like a character from an Arcade Fighting game.. =D 

m00k said:

Only thing I can think of is too maybe crush some of those midtones and get some more light on her face. Shes fairly evenly lighten right now. Also there seems to be a strange highlight on her right hip, a reflection of your plane light? Other than that nice work!

Thanks man for the feedback, i see your point and i will do some tweak on the light for sure, for the hip highlight is because the rimlight get stopped from the jacket, rotating the light a bit i think will do the trick.. (i hope) 

=D

Torch

Nice style, pose and texture/material definition, love it  

kawaiispacekillers

that's an awesome sculpt and rendering ! great work on her ! i really like the proportion !

Jappomo

Thanks guys, appreciated, and i am happy to share with you the final post on Artstation https://www.artstation.com/artwork/lVO2e5