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Hakim II Rifle(WIP) - Critique Welcome

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heyo guys been a while since I posted a project here, 

I'm trying to make a... "futurized" version of the Egyptian Hakim rifle,  so naturally it's a coil gun DMR thing(hence why it doesn't have a bolt loader)

If you see something wrong with it, don't hesitate to post about it, thanks.

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    Changelog

    Added a charging handle(that's the correct term, not "bolt carrier"), I don't know what I was thinking when I said that "coil guns dont have bolt carriers!!1"

    Did a bit of research on Coil guns, they actually don't need gas tubes, so I converted the gas tube to a... "heat compensation/bullet acceleration apparatus"

    Blocked in a scope


    and I forgot to add a trigger :|


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    Changelog 

    Made the scope, damn thing now makes the rest of the model look like shit :/


    Added a "charging power port" thing

    Changed the text, thinking of changing the name of the rifle entirely

    Detailed the "heat sink" to make it more obvious that it was a heat sink
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    Changelog

    Changed the stock
    Added coils to the barrel on the front to hammer home that this is a coil gun
    Removed the "حكيم" bit, as it felt a bit tacky
    Softened up all the bevels 
    Added a "power switch"
    Added a "battery"
    Shortened the clip to make it look more inline with the Original Hakim rifle


    Okay, I'm pretty confident on the Highpoly, think I'm gonna low polinize(?)/UV map it and get texturing!
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    Early render

    Bake came out perfectly

    I made a really simple texture to define a bit of material definition and later I'll get into the even more fun bits!

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    Scope.png

    ....

    eh
    feeling lazy, here's another render
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    Looking back at it, It doesn't look quite as great as I remember it being

    but now, I'm giving it another go.




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