Redo Art Test from 2 years ago
Hi Everyone,
Thanks
for taking the time to look.
Two
years ago I did an art test for a job that I didn't get =( I decided to
redo the art test with mostly the same rules as last time. I took a little bit
of extra time for my 2nd attempt. Maybe about an hour or two extra.
[Rules]
Complete a HP model within 8 hours. Two References are provided.
[My
thoughts] I'm much happier with my 2nd attempt. My topology is a lot cleaner
and my edge flow work is a bit better. There still some pinching happening in
certain places, but not too much. Also, if I wanted to bake this to a LP model
the edges would need to be A LOT softer. I learned how resetting the X-Form can
really mess with the edges. The proportions of the model don't feel exactly
right as well. The little arm piece on the side is too thin/small. Overall I'm happier
with it, but still have a lot to learn. It was still challenging to make the model but I felt a lot more confident in my abilities the 2nd time around.
Any
feedback or pointers on my results are welcomed, or you can tell me to quit
modeling and become a professional urinal puck maker 
Replies
Rendered the HP in Marmoset for better lighting. Also edited the little arm piece on the side.