Chinese Temple Environment
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Hi Guys, my second post on here (posted on a fair few hours ago with a different project)
This is the Final Year Project that I had create during my university course and any and all feedback on this would be greatly appreciated.
This is the Final Year Project that I had create during my university course and any and all feedback on this would be greatly appreciated.
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1st image:
The entrance to the temple is almost purely back (it is too dark), there should be some bounce light similar to this:
If it is going to be that bright out, the inside of the temple should be much darker.
2nd image:
- the grass is too noisy (too small of details)
- the tree texture is too blurry. Find a middle ground where all the textures have the same scale of detail. (the bark is very zoomed-in, while the grass is very zoomed-out)
3rd image:
- the skybox (or background texture?) is very blurry.
- the railings seem very low (you could double the height)
- that god ray at the left is confusing. (if there is a god ray that bright, there should be a lot of clouds (which would shade a lot of the ground around it)
- the valley is lacking details (you could add large rocks or something there) as it is right now it is just empty space.
- check out tree normals or foliage in the wiki at the top of the website (the tree leaves have too much contrast)
- add more variety in the grass planes
4th image:
- again, check out foliage tutorials and "foliage" on the wiki at the top of the website. (especially check out Eric Chadwick's breakdown)
- The surface of the water seems very dark compared to the ambient light/skybox (maybe use a brighter hue, or make the texture a bit more translucent (less opaque)
- you should add some details on the surface of the water (some leaves or rocks/etc)
5th image:
- there is too much ambient light (darken it down a bit)
- there is ambient light but no visual lightsource. (where is that light coming from?)
- add some details on the ceiling
- add some variety on the walls to break the complete symmetry of the room, or to make it more interesting to look at.
Other than that, it's looking good. I like the ideas that you are going for.