Bikergirl WIP

Wiggles · Apr 2014

Hi Polycounters,
I recently finished this girl, felt it was time to polish those realistic modeling skills again. The cloth on her pants was a struggle, but I have to say had real fun with it so far!
Anyways, don't be shy to lend me your critical eye, it's definately appreciated!

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with the fix

Wiggles · Apr 2014

the sculpt

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Wiggles · May 2014

the ref i worked with and her bikerpatch

the wireframe (around 9500 poly's, could be brought down if needed without affecting the silhouette. someday..

PyrZern · May 2014

I am by no mean an expert, but I think her hands/fingers are a little too long, while her arms are a tad too short. Seems she can barely reach her crotch. Her cranium feels to be too small, and hair on her forehead should be a bit longer. Her right knee is fine, but the left knee with the knee-pad feels flat. I imagine it should extrude out a bit. She looks great though, and quite nice topo there as well.

visoutre · May 2014

oh nice! I made a biker girl around a year ago, this is cool. I agree with the crit, proportions feel off in places. I feel the folds on the bottom of the pants around ankles could be better too. But I like the face and biker patch!

Wiggles · May 2014

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah the arm and knee def seem a little off now you mention it and did a quick fix on them.

Funky Bunnies · May 2014

nice work man!

Wiggles · May 2014

Cool, thanks Funky Bunnies!

PyrZern · May 2014

I can't really tell, but does she have a topo loop in-between her thighs ? If her legs are separated by only an edge, not sure if that will deform well if she were to, I dunno, run or something.

Wiggles · May 2014

PyrZern wrote: »

I can't really tell, but does she have a topo loop in-between her thighs ? If her legs are separated by only an edge, not sure if that will deform well if she were to, I dunno, run or something.

No they didn't so I'm really glad you mentioned! Got it fixed, much noob, so mistake.

Funky Bunny was so kind to give me a paintover with quite a few subtle improvements so i took his advice at heart.
less sausage feet, better face and bodycurve etc. Thanks man! (or woman, you never know)

Bikergirl WIP

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