Bikergirl WIP

Wiggles

Hi Polycounters,
I recently finished this girl, felt it was time to polish those realistic modeling skills again. The cloth on her pants was a struggle, but I have to say had real fun with it so far!
Anyways, don't be shy to lend me your critical eye, it's definately appreciated!



with the fix

Wiggles

the sculpt

Wiggles

the ref i worked with and her bikerpatch



the wireframe (around 9500 poly's, could be brought down if needed without affecting the silhouette. someday..

PyrZern

I am by no mean an expert, but I think her hands/fingers are a little too long, while her arms are a tad too short. Seems she can barely reach her crotch. Her cranium feels to be too small, and hair on her forehead should be a bit longer. Her right knee is fine, but the left knee with the knee-pad feels flat. I imagine it should extrude out a bit. She looks great though, and quite nice topo there as well.

visoutre

oh nice! I made a biker girl around a year ago, this is cool. I agree with the crit, proportions feel off in places. I feel the folds on the bottom of the pants around ankles could be better too. But I like the face and biker patch!

Wiggles

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah the arm and knee def seem a little off now you mention it and did a quick fix on them.

Funky Bunnies

nice work man!

Wiggles

Cool, thanks Funky Bunnies!

PyrZern

I can't really tell, but does she have a topo loop in-between her thighs ? If her legs are separated by only an edge, not sure if that will deform well if she were to, I dunno, run or something.

Wiggles

PyrZern wrote: »

I can't really tell, but does she have a topo loop in-between her thighs ? If her legs are separated by only an edge, not sure if that will deform well if she were to, I dunno, run or something.

No they didn't so I'm really glad you mentioned! Got it fixed, much noob, so mistake.


Funky Bunny was so kind to give me a paintover with quite a few subtle improvements so i took his advice at heart.
less sausage feet, better face and bodycurve etc. Thanks man! (or woman, you never know)