Final Fantasy VII: Shinra Train Model

Anthricus

Been working on this for a few hours and getting the basic shapes and a bit of detail in , some parts are obviosly just block outs at the moment and there are a few errors on the turbosmooth on the back of the carriage which i need to sort.

ANy further Comment and Criticism would be great thanks guys

ANd if anyone can send me or find me some reference for the wheels that would be much appreciated i cant find much online apart fomr like a 0.25 second glimpse ina video xD

Thanks guys

roosterMAP

Good start. My main gripe is that there is a lot of pinching and you're edge flow needs work. Once you smooth all that out, the surfaces should have way less artifacts.

Anthricus

ive removed the smoothing errors in the front and back sections of the train but where else should i be looking? ive got the ones under the vents on the front of the train and on the carriage's top il upload a photo later