Character - Yakuza

FredrikNorberg

My first character in a long time. I have decided it's finished and I won't do any further alterations on it, but I wouldn't mind some feedback for future characters.

respawnrt

What immediately strikes me is that the clothes are pitch black o0 or i should have my monitor checked )

FredrikNorberg

The clothes are Black but not pure black. It's fine on both my work pc and home pc.

respawnrt

I think you could work on them since they have no definition: folds, specular reflections, some falloff.Check this one from hitman see how well defined it looks.

Nasser

I agree with respawnrt, the suit does look a bit flat. I think the tattoo is pretty awesome though, did you design it yourself?

FredrikNorberg

I'll have a look at tweaking the values a bit maybe tonight when I get home to bring out the suit a bit more.

The tattoo is a mix of real life designs and my own design.

FredrikNorberg

The character has now been updated in the top post. I forgot that I had it linked with my webpage. Might look into using a standard image upload service.

Anyway I did some minor tweaks on textures and lighting to bring out the suit some more.