So ive updated my model slightly and i would appreciate it if anyone could point out things that needs to change, its my first female model after all :P
I thought i would test posting a decimated model in a viewer so that people can have a better look: http://p3d.in/fY7oQ/smooth
Nice start man. I would not be able to give you a true critiques as i am fairly new to this myself but few things that stood out to me:
- still looks kind of soft at areas so a bit more definition of different planes would not be bad
- arm might be a bit too wide where it meets the body/ shoulder area looking from the back
- I would love to see some more definition of the scapula at that certain pose but then again i dont know what your reference is so that might not be a must
- biceps kind of sits wrong to me- it is supposed to flow under the deltoid into the armpit and now it does not.
- distance between belly button to pubic area is way too short
- double check if the knee is not too low - have not checked myself but it looks like it might be a touch too low
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I thought i would test posting a decimated model in a viewer so that people can have a better look:
http://p3d.in/fY7oQ/smooth
- still looks kind of soft at areas so a bit more definition of different planes would not be bad
- arm might be a bit too wide where it meets the body/ shoulder area looking from the back
- I would love to see some more definition of the scapula at that certain pose but then again i dont know what your reference is so that might not be a must
- biceps kind of sits wrong to me- it is supposed to flow under the deltoid into the armpit and now it does not.
- distance between belly button to pubic area is way too short
- double check if the knee is not too low - have not checked myself but it looks like it might be a touch too low
Hope some of this might actually help
Ive done some minor adjustments according to your crits, have a look and see if you think works better :
also in the modelviewer:
http://p3d.in/KckL6