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SteamBot fishing

Hello everyone,

This is the first time ever I present a personal work on polycount.com, even if a swing by on a regular basis :p

So, this a diorama where a steambot is fishing.
The all thing is around 22K triangles and was done with 3dMax, Zbrush and Photoshop.

The youtube link is a 360° animated-ish of the scene.

I hope you'll like it, and any comments are most welcome!

http://www.youtube.com/embed/t0TW4edItyM

diorama2.jpg

diorama1-copie-1.jpg

robot_final_2.jpg

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  • Eternity
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    High I'm new also and its a shame not to get any sort of notice. So lets look at each others stuff how about.

    What I can say about it is its a fine piece though the flat cutout design of the leaves feels out of style with the rest of it.

    Also though its nice to have the diorama showing everything. I wonder if a closer more detailed shot of the robot fishing and whatnot would make a better image.
  • copyright
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    copyright polycounter lvl 7
    your robot is cool but you have no edge highlights.
  • Jessica Dinh
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    Jessica Dinh polycounter lvl 10
    Hey there! I think your leaves are really cute, but you could maybe have the individual leaves casting shadows on each other, and also bend your leaf planes more because right now they are really flat.

    Also your render bg for your character makes it really hard to see your work, I think something lighter would work better, and the strong gradient is very distracting.
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