scoobydoofus - thanks for the crits! I have fixed the area around the ears. I guess you mean the hands look too young? I will get around to fixing that, but atm I am trying to learn rigging a bit more indepth
Jeremy Tabor - I scrapped the chicken because of time constraints really. I wanted to finish this character because I was relatively close anyway, but I really want to do something new really soon lol.
imo the skin tone lacks some variation.
also his arms look kinda massive compared to his lower body, although this is well hidden by the shirt it still might be worth pointing out.
apart from that very good work!
hey, thanks geoddy, I made the arms a bit smaller, but havent touched up teh textures just yet. I also made the hands wider.
Rigging was fine, I made a custom rig; but skinning... ¬_¬. I restarted like 5 times and finally downloaded a plugin called bonespro to do it, but I am almost there with it now. Good thing is I will definately be faster next time, rite?!
I sent it to one of my animator friends (jfeez) to test the skin out, and he sent back this, haha
raaah, i finished! haha, I have been getting my portfolio ready and polishing a few pieces all at once... anyway, I believe (hope) I took care of all the crits . Although, if you have more crits, please do say, I will take them into account on my next piece! have some final images:
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scoobydoofus - thanks for the crits! I have fixed the area around the ears. I guess you mean the hands look too young? I will get around to fixing that, but atm I am trying to learn rigging a bit more indepth
Jeremy Tabor - I scrapped the chicken because of time constraints really. I wanted to finish this character because I was relatively close anyway, but I really want to do something new really soon lol.
ah, i see! that's a much easier fix haha
and yeah, this was inspired from breaking bad's Walter White and mad men in general
also his arms look kinda massive compared to his lower body, although this is well hidden by the shirt it still might be worth pointing out.
apart from that very good work!
Rigging was fine, I made a custom rig; but skinning... ¬_¬. I restarted like 5 times and finally downloaded a plugin called bonespro to do it, but I am almost there with it now. Good thing is I will definately be faster next time, rite?!
I sent it to one of my animator friends (jfeez) to test the skin out, and he sent back this, haha