Robots and guns - hard surface stuff

pawelturalski

Hi! I would like to share with u guys some of my hard surface stuff . hope u enjoy c&c welcome
















By pawelekturalski at 2011-12-14




By pawelekturalski at 2011-12-14

lewist

Amazing work and real nice attention to detail. Your texture work for the SCAR is especially awesome.

Azkur

really sweat stuff here i personally think a military camo pattern on the robot would be awesome

Sparkwire

I love the scar, but i have a strange feeling that the top edge of the scar is too boxy/sharp.

pawelturalski

glad u like it:)
Azkur > i think its a great idea; gotta try it
Sparkwire > too late to fix it

konstruct

damn cool robot- The grey metal could use some love. you really nailed the worn look, but the metal still has no life due to its lack of saturation. Getting some hue variation in there would take that piece a lot further.

pawelturalski

konstruct > damn u right! but how to fix it? using cloud filter from photoshop or what? hmm..

konstruct

generally there is discoloration that accompanies chips/scratches via. rust/dirt accumulation
Also, I feel like the number one thing I gripe about on these forms, is people using 100% desaturated values in their textures. A good way to break free from this is to think in terms of warm and cool. Going one step further and applying that do your darks and lights can really make a texture pop.

Computron

Dat robot.

awesome concept, and even better execution. its got some interesting mechanical details and the textures look awesome.

pawelturalski

ive updated the first pic but im not sure if thts what u were talking about maybe quick paintover? :P

pawelturalski

And some other pics form SCAR

HP:

By pawelekturalski at 2011-12-15

LP:

By pawelekturalski at 2011-12-15

n88tr

whats that little sled thing in front of the scope?

twigdamnyou

awesome stuff man, can we get some texture sheets? I really want to see how you laid the uv's out for these pieces.

pawelturalski

n88tr > there are some mistakes that i made making the SCAR; i would make some things different now but we all learn on our mistakes
Here u are. BTW: these are all portfolio pieces so the polycount isnt so resonable - i know that ive seen guns from MW 3 and homecoming and all of the tricks they used to safe lot of space on UV and geometry.


By pawelekturalski at 2011-12-15


By pawelekturalski at 2011-12-15

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By pawelekturalski at 2011-12-15


By pawelekturalski at 2011-12-15

And a bonus


By pawelekturalski at 2011-12-15

Dimfist

I really dig it all. As far as your unpainted metals falling a little flat, maybe toss some color splashes in it, very low low opacity?

cptSwing

liking the organic forms on that last model especially!

might i suggest a low-to-low AO bake for the SCAR? the tape and mags are eerily lacking shadows, in my opinion. great modeling work, though!

pawelturalski

thnx for feedback friends. here is a HP shot:



By pawelekturalski at 2011-12-17

achillesian

gorilla robot is scaring the shit out of me

TrevorJ

Awesome modelling, loving the panel lines, very clean.

ErichWK

That last orange/white prop is pretty awesome! Can you post wires? I'm curious how you kept it so clean without pinching.

Belias

fantastic. .

Ofrst

really great stuff!!

BanishedFox

Wow they look really fantastic man

Would be interested to know what texture size you've done for the scar?

pawelturalski

thank u all for c&c!
ErichWK > unfortunately i dont have the files from that model anymore because its pretty old stuff and it just got lost from my hard drive. But i can show u an artwork, which was made based on that model and u can check it out here : http://pawelturalski.cgsociety.org/gallery/915305/

BanishedFox > 2x2k - one for body, second one for scope and flashlight

Azkur

oh god i really like that one wip you posted i think it has really slick lines and sexy shapes goin xD did you end up trying the camo pattern on the other guy? keep the good work

pawelturalski

i did try the camo - didnt look so well

Amadreaus

Sick! One thing I noticed on the SCAR, the AO seems very weak or non existent in certain places. Make sure to have it in places where object meets object. Lacking AO makes it looks fake, even toylike. Otherwise, :thumbup::thumbup::thumbup:

pawelturalski

Amadreaus > right, i srew up this - thanks bro! Ill have my eyes on this issue next time for sure!

dfacto

Really liking your work man, there's a very slick quality to your smooth shapes, especially in the wip shot, and the gun texture is just plain nice.

The only thing that bothers me in these shots is the slightly blobby limbs on the robot, which I think is largely due to the simplistic way the different sections meet at the joints. Just something to consider for future concepts, the rest you've got no problem with.

ZacD

The modeling and normals look great, but you can push the textures, spec, and material definition a lot more.

SPYFF

Awesome works!

pawelturalski

dfacto , SPYFF >> thank u - glad u like it
ZacD>> can u please give me some tips how? I would appreciate it a lot my friend

faw98272

Awesome! Love those subtle details on the scope.