Chainsaw Character Drejol WIP

TylerFluharty

A character I've been working on in my free time. Crits welcome!

Alemja

It's looking good so far, but everything feels too clean; I want to see rips, scratches, scars, tears since chainsaws are messy weapons to help tie it together. Plus bloodying up the chainsaw would also help sell this.

papagersi

Nice design!! and for the skin.. I think you need more color variation on it
I wanna see next process !!

TylerFluharty

Thanks, I'll be sure to put some serious wear n tear all over the chainsaw and some more on the skin. Adding some more variation to the skin tone is a good idea, thanks.
As for blood, that will come towards the end

TylerFluharty

Wanted to post another character that fits this guys theme I did a bit ago. Not as much time was spent on this guy because he was to be turned into a very low poly model but I'm still really happy with him. Also since he's along the same style as my current project, maybe I can learn from some mistakes made on this guy.

TylerFluharty

Some more progress, added the chainsaw model, and did a bit more texturing. Added at bit more variation to the skin texture.

LRoy

Nice man I like the chainsaw design.

Anatomy on the forearm looks a bit off to me however

TylerFluharty

Thanks Lroy, working on it.

konstruct

too much 50/50 grey. Try and think in terms of warm and cool for your desaturated areas.

IanTSR

Very Doom-esque! Just needs some colors beyond letting lighting do the trick.

Think Pinky:
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/5226/shot00011nwy.jpg

Or maybe a Cyberdemon?
http://images.wikia.com/doom/images/a/a5/Cyber.jpg

Getting the flesh colors to contrast a bit with the metal colors -- material type aside, would help sell it all. I like where it's going though. Just needs a "Boomstick!"

TylerFluharty

Could still use some work, with flesh tones and such but I'm happy with these for now.