for the tiled areas on the walls and columns id add more evidence of liquid having dripped down to break it up more. the concrete for the roof beams have evidence of liquid staining but the plane directly next to them in the corner doesnt, so you just have a line. id blend those corners more. also the graffiti seems too solid, maybe try fading it more and having wiped off areas. the bench could use more detail to break it up.
youve captured the mood and feel of a metro well, so this is definitely coming along.
Finish working on your Sci Fi scene first dude :P Good start on blockout. However, the composition is pretty boring. There is no center piece or a focus... Good start on materials, not sure if you are using normal maps (everything looks flat). Try to come up with a center piece/focal point, then change up the lighting to accommodate that. Good luck!
I like the texturing work. Train looks flat still, whereas the bench is lit and texturing so well that it looks as if that's the central focus (which could be the case)
The cracks on the tiles look off as well. They're too big versus how a tile would realistically crack and break.
There are a few things already been brought up, but I thought a paintover might help you visualize what the changes could do.
You have similar values on the pillars, walls and the train. You can differentiate these with some color and value change.
The scales looks a bit off, but I tried to measure it and it kind of seems to be ok, guess the train could be a tad higher. Have you measure your scale of things with a player model?
I'm sure you can fix some of the issues and perhaps even come up with other adjustments while you're working on it.
The scene is a little confusing for the eye. Maybe break it ub with more metal. Your pillars looks a little unnatural small maybe change them for painted metal pillars in H form with studs. This make maybe more contrast in the scne ebecause i tking you overused tiles in the same color pattern.
Seems to my eye like the general scale problem is with the tiles, yours seem too large, which throw my eyes off. For instance your tiles are 3 wide on the pillar, but in the refs they are 4-4.5
Same goes for the walls.
Adding to this is that your grout patterns are very black/wide. It's an unnatural grimyness even for an apocalyptic style environment, cleaning them up and adding at least some spec will really help.
Last, the scene looses me because of all the greenish hue, I think you should try to find places on the walls/floor to use a wider variety of materials with differing hues, should help break up some of the tedium.
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youve captured the mood and feel of a metro well, so this is definitely coming along.
The cracks on the tiles look off as well. They're too big versus how a tile would realistically crack and break.
There are a few things already been brought up, but I thought a paintover might help you visualize what the changes could do.
You have similar values on the pillars, walls and the train. You can differentiate these with some color and value change.
The scales looks a bit off, but I tried to measure it and it kind of seems to be ok, guess the train could be a tad higher. Have you measure your scale of things with a player model?
I'm sure you can fix some of the issues and perhaps even come up with other adjustments while you're working on it.
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Same goes for the walls.
Adding to this is that your grout patterns are very black/wide. It's an unnatural grimyness even for an apocalyptic style environment, cleaning them up and adding at least some spec will really help.
Last, the scene looses me because of all the greenish hue, I think you should try to find places on the walls/floor to use a wider variety of materials with differing hues, should help break up some of the tedium.