SketchBook: Double Single Cipher

DoubleSingleCipher

Currently learning 3D and trying to improve on 2D. I have so many miles ahead to learn so hopefully I will be able to learn very much from the people here.
I would love to get all the crits I can get; even simple opinions on things liked or disliked about anything I put up would be appreciated.

Thank you :I

DoubleSingleCipher

Currently I'm working on creating a hells angel. It's my second time making a character but my first time actually getting to grips with how it should be done. These were the original ideas for the character minus the chick.




These were the original Orthos i planned to use but they turned out to be really weird once inside max, so i just used a heavy naked guy for the body.


I started with the body first and I'm thinking it was a bad idea now since the face seems a little dense to flow into the body easily. I'm also not too sure on what to do with the crotch area. I've looked around (a little) but still not sure what to do about in between legs.









It's my first time uploading 3d work as well, so if anyone knows a better way to do so could you let me know.

DoubleSingleCipher

This is my face so far.
The topology isn't great and the flow is obviously weird in some places that are obvious even to me. I would change what i can tell if i had the time but meh.

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Can anyone tell me why the face is all weird. I didn't notice it while the edges were on.